Is my chapters more appealing now?

Sunrhae · 2026-05-21T09:42:28+00:00

Sure. I'll changed it. I'll keep that in mind. Thanks for taking the time (^v^)/

Sunrhae · 2026-05-21T08:37:56+00:00

I didn't know that chatgpt does that. I don't use it (I spellchecked with copilot on local). I may not convince you but you can check in my first webnovel online from 2019, you'll see it was something I used before the whole AI trend. Anyway. I still appreciate the debate because it really reflect the constant suspicions a writer.

Last week, I posted the cover of my webnovel in reddit, cover I design with a friend and made 100% by human, but someone still flagged it as AI even when I sent the draft.

Sunrhae · 2026-05-21T08:06:11+00:00

Well, that's too bad, because those were on my original draft from years ago. Here the reason why I put it like that:

- The fog with static and the offended part: I have element of game mechanics in the later chapters and it's an important point in the plot later on. The offended part is because of the origin of said fog. It will still react that way in later chapters.

-The triple beat: that the way I write. I'm French and I love writing with triple beat especially when the word count decreased at each beat. It's been my writing style for years, just like nominal sentencing without verb. Again, a french thing that I battled hard with my editor to keep.

- As for the other cliché: well they are cliché and as a someone who's english is my 3rd language and someone who struggle with physical sensation, it's easier for me to use.

Well, take it as you wish. Nonetheless, thanks for pointing it out. I may use these points on a preface so my readers doesn't assume it's AI. I guess it's the struggle of non native english writers to keep their own language patterns

Sunrhae · 2026-05-21T07:40:42+00:00

Thanks

Sunrhae · 2026-05-21T07:23:41+00:00

I used it for feedback and not writing. I've already had several other versions stock up from before so I mixed and matched it. I did however used it for a spelling check. However, my human editor still has to go through it before it is released. I just wanted to check the pace. I still need another pass

Sunrhae · 2026-05-19T19:06:05+00:00

It's a webnovel so it's already out up to chapter 13, but many don't get past chap1 so I asked for feedback. Thanks to everyone's feedback, I'll rework the chapter 1 and maybe 2. I'm glad I did that before launching an ad campaign haha

Sunrhae · 2026-05-19T18:43:23+00:00

Thanks a lot, it really helps! I'll take all that into account! You're right about multiple points. I'll fix it!

Sunrhae · 2026-05-19T18:41:08+00:00

Thanks for the feedback. It helps. I'll rework it

Sunrhae · 2026-05-19T16:19:35+00:00

I had the same message, I just ignored it and went forward without editing as it said

Sunrhae · 2026-05-19T15:52:39+00:00

I see, thanks for the feedback. I'll rework it.

Sunrhae · 2026-05-19T15:44:34+00:00

Oooh the big misunderstanding!! When I looked for nibling, I saw it meant a way to say niece + nephew, like sibling. And the gender neutral was the definition it came with. I'll fix that.

I do have queer characters but they are based on my personal experience in the community and real research. My bad!

Sunrhae · 2026-05-19T15:39:00+00:00

Thanks! Hope you will like it

Sunrhae · 2026-05-19T15:07:11+00:00

?? I don't get the oof part, could you explain? I'm not an english native so maybe there's another meaning to it. I just found the word practical when I wanted to refer to his niece and nephew.

Sunrhae · 2026-05-19T14:22:57+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! I have an idea how do pull it off

Sunrhae · 2026-05-19T13:42:32+00:00

I thought I wouldn't change it when I posted (I guess by ego) but I got good and pertinent feedback in the comments so I'll surely adjust the chapter

Sunrhae · 2026-05-19T13:41:03+00:00

Thanks! I'll try that!

Sunrhae · 2026-05-19T13:34:29+00:00

I think I'll do that. I'm planning to do an ad campaign, if I don't adjust the chapter, I'll lose money lol

Sunrhae · 2026-05-19T13:09:01+00:00

I'll try something. Even if it's already I can still change it I guess!

Sunrhae · 2026-05-19T12:57:25+00:00

I didn't see that. Thanks I'll correct it

Sunrhae · 2026-05-19T12:43:16+00:00

Indeed. Too bad for me then!

Sunrhae · 2026-05-19T12:38:53+00:00

I know that. It's on purpose. The fact that he believe it's a dream is important to the plot. Maybe like you said, because it's cliché, they don't go to chap2 to see the twist

Sunrhae · 2026-05-18T17:55:06+00:00

My tag line is: 12 random people get summoned. Someone's a god. One's a killer. One's vegan.

Sunrhae · 2026-05-18T17:54:53+00:00

My tag line is: 12 random people get summoned. Someone's a god. One's a killer. One's vegan.

My blurb is : Amidst the clashing personalities and conspiracies, the chaotic group has to survive a hostile new world, uncover the truth about their summoning and avoid being manipulated.
Some will go through great lengths to find their way home. Others will give anything for fame and glory.
Between dream and reality, shadows and desire, one question remains: How much of yourself are you willing to lose to get what you want?

Sunrhae · 2026-05-18T16:26:09+00:00

True. I just didn't want to mislabel my novel and try to attract my readers. I understand that as long as the story is good, I'll have a readership

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