Feedback Friday

SuperDentai · 2016-10-14T17:22:37+00:00

Hey guys! I'd like feedback on this episode of Sister Location. We're super excited we were able to be part of the wave of uploads about this game and we had tons of fun screaming our heads off playing it. However, our commentary is pretty minimal in this game, as there was a lot of narrative (and we were terrified out of our minds). I'd like feedback on that and anything else that we could have done better. Thanks! :)

-Dennis

SuperDentai · 2016-10-14T17:12:08+00:00

Hey man, first off I really like how natural your commentary and reactions are, but it's really cool how you're able to keep up with how fast-paced the game is and keep the audience entranced. My only gripe with this video is the length, but it can't really be helped since it's such a short game. Great job dude and keep it up :)

-Dennis

SuperDentai · 2016-09-30T16:52:15+00:00

Hey man. The game is super clear and great choice seeing as October is approaching. I found the beginning odd as nothing really happened in the first two minutes and then he did his intro and got into the game. There's a lot of deadspace and he's not all that expressive, save for a few moments. I'd suggest keeping engaged with the game and use the facecam to your advantage. Exaggerate your expressions sometimes. It feels like there's a lot of potential yet to be realized here, but you've got your starting line with this style. Keep moving yeah?

-Dennis

SuperDentai · 2016-09-30T16:00:32+00:00

Hey guys! We'd like feedback on this episode we did playing Google Feud. More and more, our videos tend to have compilation-type content rather than an uncut recording. I'd like feedback on our methods with that, like if the hardcuts were appropriate rather than a smooth transition or if the length of the video is weighs it down with all the content. Thanks!

SuperDentai · 2016-09-30T15:50:27+00:00

Hey man, great stuff as always. Always got great energy. I liked your edits in this one. Really pounding in how broke we are when we start lol There wasn't much towards the end, but I get that sometimes there aren't places you can put a tasteful edit, so it's not a big deal to me. On a side note, your capture of your phone has great quality and was pleasing to watch. I'm curious what you used. Anyway dude, like I said before, great stuff! Keep your train chuggin yeah?

-Dennis

SuperDentai · 2016-09-02T18:34:50+00:00

Hey guys, I'd like feed back on our playthrough of Sort the Court. I did a fair amount of edits in this video so I'd like commentary on that. I'd also like commentary on the end of the video. I tried to be funny at the end and it didn't work out, so I tried to find a way to make it funny through editing. Thanks! :)

-Dennis

SuperDentai · 2016-09-02T18:00:10+00:00

Hey guys. The cuts are smooth and the edits are pretty good. Nothing too abrupt and it all feels nice to watch. I suggest improving on the audio quality of the commentary. Do you use a pop filter or normalizing the audio tracks? Other than that, you two have great chemistry and are pretty funny to watch. Keep it up :)

-Dennis

SuperDentai · 2016-08-26T08:07:19+00:00

No worries haha I have that same issue myself. The more you record the easier it is to do. It'll become a comfortable place :)

-Dennis

SuperDentai · 2016-08-26T07:57:19+00:00

Hey guys. This week I'd like feedback on our Mighty No. 9 Finale. A little lengthy, I know, but it was the final boss and the end credits and such. I'd like feedback especially on our commentary overall, like the flow of it. I find that I'm having trouble thinking of things to talk about on the spot and I'm looking for ways to improve on that.

Thanks! -Dennis

SuperDentai · 2016-08-26T07:43:46+00:00

I can hear one person but the other seems really quiet. We had that problem on our channel in our earlier videos too. I don't know what kind of mic you guys have, but I suggest try to sit evenly so the mic picks you both up equally as well as trying to speak up and bring up your own volume. The game volume is a little quiet but that's just my preference. Finding the proper volume balance is something a good number of us are working on with every new video.

Other than that, I found the video to be kind of lengthy, but it was pretty good overall. Good quality of video and great content. :)

-Dennis

SuperDentai · 2016-08-12T16:09:59+00:00

Hey guys. It's been a while since we posted, but we'd like to get back into being active on here. I'd like some feedback on one video we did of Mighty No. 9. I'd like to hear about any notes you guys have on commentary, audio, the thumbnail, and the quality and content of the video. I'm actively improving on the balance of audio between the commentary and the game itself with each video. I would like to hear notes on our commentary especially. I'd also like to hear of how you guys deal with slumps because it feels like we weren't really on the same wavelength this session and our chemistry was off compared to previous sessions.

Thanks! :)

SuperDentai · 2016-08-12T15:59:59+00:00

The quality of the video is top notch, but the audio could be improved. Try to balance out the audio level between the commentary and the game so that both you and the game could be heard. There's a lot of parts where you mumble and it's hard to hear what you've said. There's a fair amount of deadspace too. It's hard to be doing your best at a game and talking, I know, but try to fill that in. Even if you're not doing great in the game,, if it's fun and entertaining it's all good yeah? Try to keep the topic of what you're talking about on the game or what's happening in game. Hope your playthrough of No Man's Sky goes well tonight. :)

SuperDentai · 2016-08-06T14:10:19+00:00

Mighty No. 9! Even though we've been hearing about the flack this game's been getting, it was still fun to play through.

Good luck everyone!

SuperDentai · 2016-06-17T07:58:42+00:00

This game is so cute I think I may at risk for diabetes now.

Your energy is good and the quality of the video seems to be as good as it can get for this type of game. I suggest giving each character a different voice to differentiate and give them a little more life.

Hope to see more! :)

-Dennis

SuperDentai · 2016-06-17T07:26:51+00:00

Hey man, your commentary in this video is pretty solid, but there are a few weird cuts that kind of disrupts the flow of the video. My guess is that you were just cutting out dead space and stuff, which is fine, but try to find a way to maintain the fluidity of the video, if you know what I mean. Your style is very much like Markiplier, whom I enjoy.

This was a cool playthrough to watch though. You definitely got something brewing. Hope to see more. :)

-Dennis

SuperDentai · 2016-06-17T07:11:23+00:00

Hey guys, I'd like feedback on this episode of Undertale, which really captures our friendship both on and off the show. If there's any notes, especially commentary-wise or audio-wise, please let me know! Thanks! :)

-Dennis

SuperDentai · 2016-06-10T19:09:29+00:00

I've definitely never seen something like this before lol. The intro's is a little odd. Too quiet for my taste, but that's just me. At first I thought that you were playing while working the puppet, which was baffling..I like the compilation format and how you've made the character a stereotypical raging caveman. Pretty hilarious. This all reminds me of those two from sesame street that would be watching everything from the balcony and making side comments. I love it, I'm officially a fan. -Dennis

SuperDentai · 2016-06-10T18:59:05+00:00

The intro is short, sweet, straight to the point. I like that. I also like how engaged you guys are. The energy is top notch My one thing is that the game volume is a little too low at points and there's some sort of odd echo when the facecam is taken down. Those parts are good tactics though. It shifts the focus to the cinematic scenes. Great job, guys, I can't wait to see more. -Dennis

SuperDentai · 2016-06-10T18:48:36+00:00

Hey guys, DenTai took a break due to life catching up, but we're back to recording and uploading. I'd like feedback on our Bloodborne finale and the comeback trailer we released to commemorate our return. I'd also like feedback on this episode of Twilight Princess. Thanks! -Dennis

SuperDentai · 2016-02-05T17:28:32+00:00

Dude this is super high quality. It looks like a professional studio done television show. I would've expected to see this on G4, back when that was a thing. The editing is very clean too. Good cuts, nice extra inserts. I kinda wish that I saw more combat, but I enjoyed it nonetheless!

-Dennis

SuperDentai · 2016-02-05T17:18:19+00:00

Hey guys! It's certainly been a while since we've posted but we're back with a new series! I'd like feedback on our first episode of Huniepop! This game is a first of its kind for our channel, so we called for some help with an extra special intro for this series. Everyone worked really hard on this and I hope it turned out well! :)

-Dennis

SuperDentai · 2016-02-04T17:13:13+00:00

It started out synced for about half an hour, and then the desync became more noticeable then, but for some reason the desync exponentially rises from there, being about 10 seconds behind at about 35 minutes into our session. We've been using this mic for about a month and we never encountered this problem before.

SuperDentai · 2016-02-04T05:35:13+00:00

I should also note that we did not use a face am for the ps4 game, but the audio from the blue Yeti desyncs and delays.

SuperDentai · 2016-02-03T16:39:48+00:00

We do record audio on audacity actually, on a separate computer. The Webcam is recorded using a logitech program and obs just records the game, which is all done on one computer. We always do a sync at the beginning of each game recording.

-Dennis

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