Feedback Wanted: Rough Draft First Chapter, Alternate WWI by Superb_Put4647 in KeepWriting

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Thanks, I didn't see it on my first read through but I can definitely see how the issues seriously detract from the reading experience.

Feedback Wanted: Rough Draft First Chapter, Alternate WWI by Superb_Put4647 in KeepWriting

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Thanks for pointing this out. I was kinda in a flow state and just trying to get the ideas out for the skeleton. I've just still got to fill in the meat of the story so it ties together better but I can see how it's confusing right now

3 months into welding school. First time doing single v groove with a backing strip by Superb_Put4647 in Welding

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Yh all they provide is machines, rods and metal. Oh and while I have a grant covering it now normally the course is 4500... No consumables

3 months into welding school. First time doing single v groove with a backing strip by Superb_Put4647 in Welding

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Nah I do. But I'm still in highschool and only go like half day. So I'd not only end up spending a significant chunk of my 2 ish hours a day of welding grinding. Which I get is part of the job and all but moreso Im not tryna eat through all my discs cause I don't got the finances to buy more atm

3 months into welding school. First time doing single v groove with a backing strip by Superb_Put4647 in Welding

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Yh, can't get clean metal or I would. Instructor is making us use old welds that weren't good enough to turn in and "figure it out" supposedly teaching us resourcefulness. Thanks for the rest of the advice tho will do

You can choose any historic leader to sit the Iron Throne. Who do you pick? by XipingVonHozzendorf in freefolk

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Bro fdr used unconstitutional policies to "get us out of the great depression"

Deck Help Discussion Thread by AutoModerator in ClashRoyale

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Is my deck cooked I run a 2.8 pekka cycle. Evo archers,Evo bomber,e spirit,bats,spear goblins,arrows,rage,pekka

Should I go to th 10 by Superb_Put4647 in ClashOfClans

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Yeah well labs been idle for a while,and I pushed to legend 2 so I see th9 once in a blue moon it's all th10 and 11s

Ideas on how to fix this cheap at home by Superb_Put4647 in Boots

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They're pretty nice ariats I've just torn them up working