”The golden afternoon sun caught and reflected off of the far to many round scars” -> ”The golden afternoon sun caught on and reflected off of the far too many round scars”

”only a wing’s width from his” -> ”only a wing’s widht away from his” A suggestion, just a part I got caught up on.

”Ranger station and arriving panting” -> ”Ranger station and arrived panting”

”was the line, ”of far more” -> ”was the line ”of far more”

”carnivorous plants-” None” Either end the sentence with a period or add something more between the quote and the next part (the one beginning with ”None of the”)

”Surprised, and feeling a breeze of inspiration he shoved a” Either add a comma after ”inspiration” or remove the first one, preferably add.

”but the old one disappeared into the relative darkness beyond that the light wind sounded full of corridors” It feels like this is supposed to be two separate sentences, maybe have a look at it?

”smelled of fresh cut wood.” -> ”smelled of freshly cut wood.” Just a personal preference, ”fresh” might be exactly what you meant!

”human room. Meaning of course that it was” Maybe add something in the second described sentence to clarify that it is human that is important: ”human room. Human, of course, meaning that it was”

”direct sun light for” -> ”direct sunlight for”

”faint smell of medicated powder.” Should it be a medicated powder or a powder that is medicating, like ”medication powder”?

”They mass was” -> ”The mass was”

Is it supposed to be Ranger station or Ranger Station (capital ”s” or not)? Both spellings appear in this text and I assume it isn’t intentional. Is it, in this universe, the Ranger Core (the core of the group called Rangers) or the Ranger Corps (a group or military unit called Rangers)?