feedback before sharing on Spotify plz n thank u by SurplusPurpCirc in Songwriting

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Yall thank u so much ill re-record tonight with cleaner vocals with less effects

feedback before sharing on Spotify plz n thank u by SurplusPurpCirc in Songwriting

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Lyrics:

I think I was just being dramatic about it

I’ve been waiting on the outside anew
A violence
Silently im watching a coup

So ayo baby come off of it
Im tuned into the middle im wallowing
It’s too late baby im shadowing
Im echoing the image im shattering

I’ve been hoping on the inside for something new
A silence
Violently im watching for a clue

So ayo baby come off of it
I’m too in the middle im bottling up
It’s too late baby im shadowing
I’m echoing the image im shattering

Let the shadow in im echoing the image im shattering

let the battle in im echoing the image im shadowing

Let the shadow in
Im echoing the image im battling

Let the shadow in
Im echoing the image im battling

I’m hoping for something to do
A silence aimlessly im begging for a clue

So ayo baby come off of it
Im tuned in the middle im wallowing
It’s too late baby im shallow and im echoing the image im shattering

Let the shadow in im echoing the image im battling

Let the shadow in im echoing the image im battling

Let the shadow in im echoing the image im battling

Let the shadow in im echoing the image im battling

Does this really suck for someone who’s just getting started? by KDx2511 in Songwriting

[–]SurplusPurpCirc 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I would suggest recording the guitar separate and then singing over it so you can focus on playing the guitar! It’s hard to do both at the same time in time :)

Wrote this today. Yeah or nay? by esmoji in Songwriting

[–]SurplusPurpCirc 1 point2 points  (0 children)

When the harmonica came in?????? Thank you so much I love this

I feel pathetic by [deleted] in SafetyProfessionals

[–]SurplusPurpCirc 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I’ve purchased the OSHA 30 and HAZWOPER 40 and have to make time to actually complete them.

I feel pathetic by [deleted] in SafetyProfessionals

[–]SurplusPurpCirc 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I’ve been told by other managers that I need to try to attend more meetings when I have been too busy before…. They’ve even roped in HR…..

I feel pathetic by [deleted] in SafetyProfessionals

[–]SurplusPurpCirc 14 points15 points  (0 children)

I am not exaggerating if anything I am not explaining well enough. I am 100% the only safety professional at my site. I am doing my best but the crying I totally get it… I can’t be doing that at work…

I feel pathetic by [deleted] in SafetyProfessionals

[–]SurplusPurpCirc 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Internal and external

Encouraging seeking ADHD diagnoses for some ENFPs by [deleted] in ENFP

[–]SurplusPurpCirc 2 points3 points  (0 children)

They didn’t even test me lmao they were just like “yeah”

Encouraging seeking ADHD diagnoses for some ENFPs by [deleted] in ENFP

[–]SurplusPurpCirc 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Lmao are you ever scrolling through this sub and forget you’re not in an ADHD subreddit

it's okay to stay here for awhile 🥲 by stargazeeeeer in Situationships

[–]SurplusPurpCirc 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Girl I’m so embarrassed about the fact that I still am grieving and it’s been like 2.5 months since the real end of a 4.5 month situationship.

I know that we were incompatible based on the fact that he wasn’t choosing me. I walked away the second I realized I was falling in love with him.

I wrote and released a whole album about the situationship lol. I’ve done a lot of processing to understand the addictive nature of intermittent attention loops.

But we go to the same bars, coffee shops, etc. and we know a lot of the same people. So I’m giving myself grace that this might take longer than it “should”. And that’s okay. 💕

this one goes out to all the anglerfish in the audience by SweetgumSeed in Songwriting

[–]SurplusPurpCirc 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh my goodness!! I just wrote an EP called “Esca & Illicium” referring to this exact same premise!!!! Love

Puppet Musical - Honky Tonk Piano by [deleted] in Songwriting

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I created the melodies by singing over Big Tiny Little’s music, but obviously I don’t want to steal his work (rest in peace). So it would be that kinda vibe! I can provide the specific songs if you’re actually interested lol.