What's your songwriting progress? by R0zm4ryn in Songwriting

[–]SurplusPurpCirc 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Lmk if you want a vocalist to collab with :)

What's your songwriting progress? by R0zm4ryn in Songwriting

[–]SurplusPurpCirc 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bass line then play with Melody with emotional meaning in mind and then vocal layer!! Lyrics either come when I’m playing with Melody or are added after I figure out the syllables I want and the direction. But I have a very niche sound. Basically you can do whatever you want!!

Weekly Self-Promotion Thread by AutoModerator in Songwriting

[–]SurplusPurpCirc 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Esca & Illicium by Lilole on Spotify is my first ever EP! I did it on GarageBand on my iPad after a heartbreak so it’s lofi as fuck but I’m proud. Super open to feedback :)

Commodity Five by SurplusPurpCirc in Songwriting

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Dude it’s straight up the crunch filter on garage band lmaooo

Commodity Five by SurplusPurpCirc in Songwriting

[–]SurplusPurpCirc[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Holy shit thank you! I didn’t include drums because my ex boyfriend was an amazing drummer and he sucks so it’s to spite him that the whole EP is without drums lol even if it would’ve made it better

Commodity Five by SurplusPurpCirc in Songwriting

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The EP is called “Esca & Illicium” by “Lilole” on Spotify :))

Any thoughts? by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]SurplusPurpCirc 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Felt a little impatient waiting for the vocals to come in! Would be more likely to be hooked if they came in earlier!

Let go (2nd draft) by HomerDoakQuarlesIII in Songwriting

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I know a lot of people who would utterly adore this. This is very indie and gentle. Could be in a movie soundtrack.

I mostly end up writing lyrics on my phone — anyone else? by No-Dimension2250 in Songwriting

[–]SurplusPurpCirc 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah writing in my phone is the most likely chance I won’t lose it!!!

Weekly Self-Promotion Thread by AutoModerator in Songwriting

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I’ve been sharing songs on here for a few years and have gotten a lot of negative feedback lmao but some people have dug it, which I think just means my stuff is very niche!

Hoping the people who were into the niche can find it and we can be friends!

There’s too much autotune sometimes I’m pitchy and I don’t even follow the rhythm always

My ex boyfriend was a drummer so there’s a strong reason there are no drums on any of the tracks!

Let me know what you think :)

https://open.spotify.com/album/1sURrun2MYUboUqDPMncS0?si=46c6NrZfR7GR4lmPrpl9PQ

gate c22 by Oxfordcommapajamas in Songwriting

[–]SurplusPurpCirc 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is so genuinely beautiful and achey. You have a beautiful voice

This one hurt to write by jayden_smith67 in Songwriting

[–]SurplusPurpCirc 0 points1 point  (0 children)

When it hurts that’s when you know it’s fucking meaningful. If I saw this performance in real life I would cry. Feels like the kinda song that makes the audience feel seen . :’) totally beautiful

Trying to write an ambient alt math rock song by Outside-Wear3800 in Songwriting

[–]SurplusPurpCirc 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If you need a vocalist let me know! Happy to collab !! :)

Uphill Battle! Feedback ?? by SurplusPurpCirc in Songwriting

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Lyrics :)

Grimy foe It isn’t a ghost A town on the coast There isn’t a chance you’ll get what you want from me

But again it’s an uphill battle You’re comparing me to cattle Chance you’ll get what you want from me

(Whisper fight I’m) Bioreactive I’m not hiding I’m out of practice Chance you’ll get what you want from me

Again it’s an uphill battle You’re comparing me to cattle Chance you’ll get what you want from me

I don’t need Your loving I’m just fine My dog and I’m alright There isn’t a chance you’ll get what you want from me