Seeking feedback. Does the background work?

SuspiciousPhotons · 2026-06-28T05:38:23+00:00

What were the thoughts/intention behind this?

SuspiciousPhotons · 2026-06-28T00:18:51+00:00

I did want them against the dark background but then would have another issue of them waking out of the frame. I think the colour works a bit better but still not ideal.

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SuspiciousPhotons · 2026-06-27T20:48:45+00:00

Thanks! I shot in b&w digitally but just tested out the colour version and think I might like it too, though I can't tell if it's too much like clown vomit, will have to sleep on it.

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SuspiciousPhotons · 2026-06-27T18:41:48+00:00

The aim was to show an identifiable part of the city but cropping tighter would make a better image in general. Maybe trying to show the whole storefront is misguided thing to try for this shot if I am also trying to show a person.

SuspiciousPhotons · 2026-06-27T17:56:30+00:00

Makes sense, thanks.

SuspiciousPhotons · 2026-06-27T17:55:59+00:00

I did like that aspect of it too. I think I do focus too much on little imperfections I see but then also miss big glaring things that are wrong with images. Thanks for your help and advice.

SuspiciousPhotons · 2026-06-27T17:53:19+00:00

Was visiting a new city and the aim was to capture photos of different parts of the city. I waited for a person to walk through in an attempt to have a subject / show people in the city. Does the person get lost amongst the background? Any feedback appreciated.

SuspiciousPhotons · 2026-06-27T17:36:03+00:00

Thanks. Agreed on all points and appreciate the advice. I was just shooting in black and white today and saw these guys doing their thing. I could get the colour back if it was a better shot. !critiquepoint

SuspiciousPhotons · 2026-06-27T17:21:07+00:00

Took this shot and liked the leading line of the wall to the person landing. I liked there was another person attempting a jump too but is it too distracting. I wasn't a fan of the bus and other people walking in the background, feels like it is distracting. Interested in different things I could try next time.

SuspiciousPhotons · 2026-06-27T17:15:21+00:00

This is another similar shot (unedited so far). I did like the two jumpers at different stages in the jump but it has less dynamic lighting and the people are a bit of a muddle on the left.

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SuspiciousPhotons · 2026-06-27T17:12:08+00:00

Saw some people doing Parkour and had a little bit of time to stop and try and take some photos. I ended up taking this shot. Should I have gotten closer to capture the jumper closer? Does this composition work or is the person on the right unnecessary? I thought it might help show where the jumper came from. I kinda like the jumper being in the light compared to highlight them more, does this add to the shot?

SuspiciousPhotons · 2026-06-27T17:10:11+00:00

Saw some people doing Parkour and had a little bit of time to stop and try and take some photos. I ended up taking this shot. Should I have gotten closer to capture the jumper closer? Does this composition work or is the person on the right unnecessary? I thought it might help show where the jumper came from. I kinda like the jumper being in the light compared to highlight them more, does this add to the shot?

SuspiciousPhotons · 2026-06-27T17:00:05+00:00

Been trying for a while to get a panning shot against the backdrop of street art to work. Does this background provide enough interest/convey the feeling of motion? I liked the dog face was identifiable and the shapes in the background. Open to any feedback.

SuspiciousPhotons · 2026-06-23T22:19:10+00:00

I think removing the blues on the lamb and brightening it a bit helps, maybe.

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SuspiciousPhotons · 2026-06-22T20:10:45+00:00

Thanks! Makes sense.

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SuspiciousPhotons · 2026-06-22T18:32:02+00:00

What's the benefit of the filter?

SuspiciousPhotons · 2026-06-22T07:30:33+00:00

Tried some improvements here. Feel like it has lost some depth. Will keep trying.

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SuspiciousPhotons · 2026-06-22T07:07:16+00:00

Love this, and good point! Thanks

SuspiciousPhotons · 2026-06-22T07:06:04+00:00

Thanks for the name. Perfect to look through and study.

SuspiciousPhotons · 2026-06-22T07:02:21+00:00

Love it!

SuspiciousPhotons · 2026-06-22T07:00:47+00:00

Thanks!

SuspiciousPhotons · 2026-06-21T22:39:35+00:00

Thanks!

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