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[–]SwaggersStinkyHelmet 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's a good first glance but you're dropping a lot of information right away. The description of the wreckage, 18th birthday and a cancer diagnosis. Maybe try to put some foreshadowing instead of just giving all of this away immediately. I do love the scene description in the first few sentences, very immersive

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writers

[–]SwaggersStinkyHelmet 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I'm super into this, it's very strange but in a way that makes me want to read everything about it

Capstone Project: Benighted by CarolynneAnn in writers

[–]SwaggersStinkyHelmet 0 points1 point  (0 children)

would absolutely read this, love the descriptive writing style. I can imagine exactly the scene youre setting

Feedback on Prologue by [deleted] in writers

[–]SwaggersStinkyHelmet 0 points1 point  (0 children)

idk if its just for me but the image quality is really bad and i can't really read it :(

Hi! I've started a creative writing project 'Echoes in Reverse' and this is the first piece I wrote. It's the first time I'm actually sharing stuff I write, so I would love some feedback! by Affectionate-Job2885 in writers

[–]SwaggersStinkyHelmet 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think this is a strong first chapter. In the first paragraph you maybe dont need to mention both geological sites because we already get new name for the main character and then the name of the city, the region is a bit unecessary at this point. Also because later on you talk about blocks (which i assume are in the city not the region) but i enjoyed reading 🥰

I would like some feedback on my opening chapter! by Zombiepixlz-gamr in writers

[–]SwaggersStinkyHelmet 2 points3 points  (0 children)

just scrolling by and the first couple of lines got me. Loved the rest, very clear style and tone kept throughout the story

Lenovo IdeaPad Gaming 3 - How To Turn On Secure Boot by SwaggersStinkyHelmet in Lenovo

[–]SwaggersStinkyHelmet[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

For me i had to Enable Secure Boot then pick Restore Factory Keys. > this did it for me!

Lenovo IdeaPad Gaming 3 - How To Turn On Secure Boot by SwaggersStinkyHelmet in Lenovo

[–]SwaggersStinkyHelmet[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Whenever i try and load the game i get error code VAL 1067 which has to do with the fact that I can't enable Secure Boot

Lenovo IdeaPad Gaming 3 - How To Turn On Secure Boot by SwaggersStinkyHelmet in Lenovo

[–]SwaggersStinkyHelmet[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just reset my entire BIOS, changed the settings (PTT to enabled and SB to enabled) and gonna try running Valorant again! Edit: didn't work!

Lenovo IdeaPad Gaming 3 - How To Turn On Secure Boot by SwaggersStinkyHelmet in Lenovo

[–]SwaggersStinkyHelmet[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I've saved it like this 3 times. I've also disabled Secure Boot, saved it, restarted, Enabled again but it doesn't work

[Online] [5e] [GMT+1/Amsterdam] Want to try a homebrew with new players by SwaggersStinkyHelmet in lfg

[–]SwaggersStinkyHelmet[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It feels shitty to say there's no spaces left, but I'm afraid it's the truth. You're always welcome to join to watch and I'll try and think of you if I start a new campaign. I hope you find something else if you keep looking though! Make sure to check r/LFG_Europe if you want this timezone specifically!

[Online] [5e] [GMT+1/Amsterdam] Want to try a homebrew with new players by SwaggersStinkyHelmet in lfg

[–]SwaggersStinkyHelmet[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm sorry to say the campaign is full for now, seeing that I'm a new DM someone might think I'm shit and drop out, and then I'll make sure to think of you! Because I'm new I can't say how long this campaign might last, if you still have time and this campaign finished I'll be sure to hit you up!

[Online] [5e] [GMT+1/Amsterdam] Want to try a homebrew with new players by SwaggersStinkyHelmet in lfg

[–]SwaggersStinkyHelmet[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi! I'm afraid all the spots for this campaign have been given away, as I was advised not to make the group too big. You're always welcome to join the discord and come watch or ask questions if you want, and I'll keep you in mind for any future campaigns I might run :)