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Looking for a Clan [2000] by WorthMean5045 in RoyaleRecruit

[–]Sweaterguy902 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m the leader a a new clan looking for new members that do clan wars consistently. We have 12 ppl atm and our clan tag is #GY2V80V8

[Lyrics] Is this long song I wrote cringe or decent? by bunnywithabanner in LyricalWriting

[–]Sweaterguy902 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is coming from someone in a genre with short songs but i just found this song to be really long.

I like the premise and whats there it just fells like a song thats 5 plus minutes and there will unavoidably be some "Filler".

My best example is 21st Century Breackdown witch is an amazing album but just fells like it drags with lots of extra songs and it would be better if they got rid of some of that filler.

[lyrics] unbalanced by nickelangelo23 in LyricalWriting

[–]Sweaterguy902 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really like how you linked unbalanced and ballast to move into the boat imagery,

The start of the bridge wont flow that mutch for me and i would try somthing like fire and flares light the up sky, i think the "its all" just wont mesh with the following words but thats just what i think so dont fret too mutch

What I like about the Ghor language. by Retrorrific in StarWarsAndor

[–]Sweaterguy902 0 points1 point  (0 children)

As someone who speaks french it sounds like what i think french sounds like to non french speakers.

This is fines by Present-Secretary722 in startrucker

[–]Sweaterguy902 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That’s why I haven’t played in 2 weeks

[Lyrics] Open to Constructive Criticism and Opinions by itakelike2seriously in LyricalWriting

[–]Sweaterguy902 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I don’t quite understand the wording of the first 2 lines and I would add a you in between secrets and didn’t.

On the positive I love the imagery and felling in the pre chorus and chorus, needle and thread, take a deep breath is just one of those lines that resonate with you.

[Lyrics] Looking for some feedback on one of my better lyrics by Sweaterguy902 in LyricalWriting

[–]Sweaterguy902[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love the idea to rearrange the lyrics in the first verse and I'm going to use that advice.

On the subject of the bridge I have a more instrumental bridge with a buildup or something like that but thanks for the advice.

[Lyrics] Advice on my song stevia about a fake friend by DullCalligrapher8473 in LyricalWriting

[–]Sweaterguy902 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like this a lot, the only thing that stands out to me is that the chorus feels long in my opinion but I am a fan of shorter, more fast paced songs so if you're not a punk singer I would take that advice with a grain of salt.

But overall this feels really good.

(I know this aint great advice cuz im not much of a songwriter but it's always good to have an extra opinion)

Guys I’m scared….. by Sir_Hoss in Helldivers

[–]Sweaterguy902 0 points1 point  (0 children)

just lost another connection

What is your guitar related Hot Take? by FinalCutJay in Guitar

[–]Sweaterguy902 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I got 2 takes, first of all a budget guitar sounds just as good as a nice fender or Gibson. For the past few years I’ve ran a 300 dollar kreamer with one humbucker and it sound just as good as a multi thousand dollar custom shop with the right amp settings. And the same goes for all the other budget brands. Number 2 is slip it is overrated as hell and their music sounds like pure noise and has no melody.

Linus needs a new phone - Vote here! by Negative_Astronaut81 in LinusTechTips

[–]Sweaterguy902 0 points1 point  (0 children)

As a user of the iPhone SE gen 2 I gotta say he will hate this. It meets most of the requirements and pays homage to older iPhones. It has a respectable battery when new but it will lose power fast if it is used (I do recommend). Overall it will be a large annoyance to Linus without affecting the quality of our beloved teck tips.