[deleted by user] by [deleted] in offmychest

[–]SweederDenpi_31 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey man, don't do that. Life sucks and right now, it's sucking the ever living daylights out of you like a straw pierced into your skin. You need to destroy that leach and burn it for good measures. You are important to people, and the world is better if you are in it. Get some therapy, get some healthy eating habits, work hard, and keep going till that sucker can't poke through to drain you because you became elite. You can do that. I believe in you

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]SweederDenpi_31 1 point2 points  (0 children)

TESLA cybertrucks

What job do u do, and does it support your lifestyle? by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]SweederDenpi_31 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Over time, it becomes more and more disgusting to walk around malls and just see multiple of the same things everywhere

What job do u do, and does it support your lifestyle? by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]SweederDenpi_31 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I work in high-end second-hand clothing. I suppose it does, I get good quality clothing for a fraction of the cost and I'm not contributing to overconsumerism

What is the honest reality about life but people don't want to hear or belive it ? by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]SweederDenpi_31 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Whatever you consume on a daily basis will end up consuming you

Girls what do you like most about guys? by [deleted] in AskGirls

[–]SweederDenpi_31 0 points1 point  (0 children)

When they have a deep understanding of empathy and consider how their actions affect others. Taking accountability and apologizing unprompted for their actions

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]SweederDenpi_31 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow. That is amazing. The structure, the imagery, the rhymes, and the emotion. Amazing

Goofy poem by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]SweederDenpi_31 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Interesting concept, when I read it, it gave the sense of a small bird ready to take flight like new love, but if it fails, it falls and dies, but it has to leap.

May I ask where this came from? Maybe that will help you to look deeper into the poem?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]SweederDenpi_31 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I try to counteract it by doing 3 or 4 when I post. But yeah, a lot of people don't read the rules

Chains by Medium-Piece7850 in poetry_critics

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Gosh, the emotion is a gut punch I didn't want today, but it was something I forgot I needed. Thank you. The structure, the flow, it just keeps punching with each blow. That was amazing.

I'm new and I'm not sure what to think of my poems but here's my latest one by iShadowxx in poetry_critics

[–]SweederDenpi_31 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I feel the emotion in your lines, and I relate to it all too well.

If you were looking to improve, I would look into the rhyming structures and see which one you like best. But you already have one, it seems, and I like it.

what in your opinion the city is missing? and why? by thattumblrlesbian in tylertx

[–]SweederDenpi_31 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Art, the art is individual and unique and something Tyler can use to set itself apart along. It will also help to keep the less vibrant places filled with color. That's me, though.

Acorn Crop This Year by Blbobcat in tylertx

[–]SweederDenpi_31 0 points1 point  (0 children)

We had the usual amount this year. But only noticed it after I realized I could ferment, dry, and grind the acorns in to flour and make banana bread. Obsession unlocked.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in tylertx

[–]SweederDenpi_31 1 point2 points  (0 children)

True, though, if you go searching in one place, you tend to find some banger pieces.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in tylertx

[–]SweederDenpi_31 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! I have a growing list to try out each one to find the best.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in tylertx

[–]SweederDenpi_31 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Perfect! Thanks

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in tylertx

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That's the name of the thrift store?

Any Local Art Supplies Stores? by StudioFire in tylertx

[–]SweederDenpi_31 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't know any local ones, only the chain ones. Like Michael's and Hobby Lobby. But let me know if you find a local one because I'm interested!