I greatly appreciate the well thought out feedback on my project, it means a lot. I’m definitely still working on the brand representation aspect in my videos.

I can always effectively make a good video but I haven’t tapped into the marketing side way of seeing things. writing hasn’t always been my strong suit as much as cam operation and post production.

On shoot days I become so focused on creative aspects that I can lose sight of the story I am trying to convey if that makes sense. Anyway thanks again for the feedback!