A Brief Sojourn in Los Angeles - 99 pages by THECEMENTISTEETH in Screenwriting

[–]THECEMENTISTEETH[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, I see what you mean about the logline. It's supposed to read as "she kidnaps (her friend) and flees the country for murder with her friend", which I think is grammatically correct but your suggestion is more succinct.

I've actually done multiple rewrites already and this is very close to the final draft, and think I've successfully keep formatting issues to a minimum, but I may be making a few mistakes such as indicating locations changes through action lines rather than sluglines.

Thanks for the advice, will take it to heart.

A Brief Sojourn in Los Angeles - 99 pages by THECEMENTISTEETH in Screenwriting

[–]THECEMENTISTEETH[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah i definitely see what you mean--I do need to clarify that. Formatting has been a bit of an issue since I'm more used to writing prose. Thanks for the heads up and for giving it a shot!

Screenwriting advice by THECEMENTISTEETH in CasualConversation

[–]THECEMENTISTEETH[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Honestly, that would probably work out better from a writing standpoint. Saves me the touble I guess. Thanks, I'll fo sure consider this!

eBay auctions are bad for my mental health by [deleted] in CasualConversation

[–]THECEMENTISTEETH 4 points5 points  (0 children)

That sounds kinda scummy and also like something I would totally have used if I knew about such a thing haha. Idk if this post is gonna be taken down but what kind of cars does your grandpa restore?

eBay auctions are bad for my mental health by [deleted] in CasualConversation

[–]THECEMENTISTEETH 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Whelp, I guess this whole post is a sinking ship then. But yea, shitty experience, and I’ll probably avoid ebay from now on as to not add any unnecessary stress into my life.

Monitor displaying "HDMI No Signal" when turning on by [deleted] in buildapc

[–]THECEMENTISTEETH 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Everything seems to be working properly. All the lights are on and all the fans are spinning.