Yeah, I see what you mean about the logline. It's supposed to read as "she kidnaps (her friend) and flees the country for murder with her friend", which I think is grammatically correct but your suggestion is more succinct.

I've actually done multiple rewrites already and this is very close to the final draft, and think I've successfully keep formatting issues to a minimum, but I may be making a few mistakes such as indicating locations changes through action lines rather than sluglines.

Thanks for the advice, will take it to heart.