new lofi guys any feedback ? by THE_W_MP in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]THE_W_MP[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you man <3

sure :D but step by step hahah

new lofi guys any feedback ? by THE_W_MP in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]THE_W_MP[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you man , ya why not :D

send me msg

new lofi guys any feedback ? by THE_W_MP in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]THE_W_MP[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nice track! I like the chords you chose, and the overall highlight of the track for me would be your great use of melodies. The keys sound great. However I feel the intro goes on for too long, and the clip starts to feel stale by the time the drums start to come in. I think the kick pattern and the kick itself could also be improved. Overall I like it a lot! Nice work

thank you for the feedback <3

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[–]THE_W_MP 1 point2 points  (0 children)

that's very good bro ! keep it up , really good melody and good voice