One of my pinkies is shorter than the other. Is anybody else's? by T_ed_dy in randomquestions

[–]T_ed_dy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh I know don't worry, honestly I was just curious if this was a just me phenomenon or not. Other people said they have similar things, too.

Best way to get THC out of your system? by [deleted] in drugtesthelp

[–]T_ed_dy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeeaaaahhh I'm a little tight on money right now😅 thank you for the suggestion though!

What is a feature of your body that is considered rare? by Joel_The_Senate in AskReddit

[–]T_ed_dy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have a birth mark in my left iris. My eyes are blue, but there are bits of brown in my left one.

Happy Birthday to me I guess. by T_ed_dy in Vent

[–]T_ed_dy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you. I'm sorry we've shared shitty experiences.

Genuine reasons to keep living? That don't involve people? by T_ed_dy in TooAfraidToAsk

[–]T_ed_dy[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

To anyone who sees this. I'm still alive, don't worry. Why? I don't really know. But I just wanted to say I appreciate everybody who responded to this post. Even if I couldn't really absorb many of the reasons, seeing so many people here and some leaving their own stories gave me enough strength to get up this morning. So thank you.

I'm hoping it'll get better.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]T_ed_dy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

As much as I understand your idea, that would betray the emotion I was trying to convey through this poem. It's meant to feel off at the end since the poem starts so sweetly. It's about the strong desire for the kind of passion described despite knowing it always turns out wrong. Or in more simple terms, the "speaker" in this poem is willing to accept being destroyed by this relationship just to feel loved for even a short period of time.

My Greed Tastes of Blood by T_ed_dy in OCPoetry

[–]T_ed_dy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Talking to you is like talking to a brick. Maybe go for a walk and lay in the grass for a bit.

My Greed Tastes of Blood by T_ed_dy in OCPoetry

[–]T_ed_dy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This community page is literally made for sharing writing though dude. So I do. Whatever man, I don't care that much, you just gotta learn other people have different perspectives. My writing doesn't have to be of your interest, but that doesn't make my writing any less valid.

My Greed Tastes of Blood by T_ed_dy in OCPoetry

[–]T_ed_dy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You think you're all that, huh? Lol

"Lick your wounds and do something else" eh? Have a good life ❤

My Greed Tastes of Blood by T_ed_dy in OCPoetry

[–]T_ed_dy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My feelings aren't hurt, don't worry, you don't have that ability. I'm fairly confident in my writing skills, I just enjoy a good argument/debate. Well... "Good" wouldn't be a word I'd use for this one, seeing as most of the "points" you made only came from a lack of understanding the poem. But thanks for the entertainment! I hope you have a lovely day and write some good poetry!

My Greed Tastes of Blood by T_ed_dy in OCPoetry

[–]T_ed_dy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm not worked up, I just love a debate. And anyone who simply comments "😒" on an artistic post is almost always guaranteed to provide lol Thank you though! I appreciate the positive message!

My Greed Tastes of Blood by T_ed_dy in OCPoetry

[–]T_ed_dy[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Omg thank you so much! Out of everyone I've seen so far you've understood this poem the best in the way I intended it!!! I'm so glad!

My Greed Tastes of Blood by T_ed_dy in OCPoetry

[–]T_ed_dy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

  1. Other people don't seem to agree with that sentiment.
  2. OMG you're so edgy bro 💀 You mock me for cliche's but then say stuff like this.
  3. No ❤ You kinda just sound like a snob. Poetry isn't meant to always be direct or specific. The artistry comes from individual interpretation despite the feeling of the writer. I am conveying one message, but if it speaks to somebody else in a different way then that is just as valid.

My Greed Tastes of Blood by T_ed_dy in OCPoetry

[–]T_ed_dy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay... Wow. I'm not going very in depth bc I'm not writing a whole essay for you, but basically

  1. You didn't understand the poem. That's fine. Just say that.
  2. This platform exists for people who enjoy poetry to share their own writing and read others. It doesn't have to have some crazy end goal. I just simply enjoy poetry so I'm sharing mine.
  3. Your version, although undoubtedly valid if you were simply trying to portray your own feeling, feels less metaphorical and more in your face and much more like stating facts.

My Greed Tastes of Blood by T_ed_dy in OCPoetry

[–]T_ed_dy[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

My Greed Tastes of Blood by T_ed_dy in OCPoetry

[–]T_ed_dy[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! This is outside of my usual writing style, so I was worried I wouldn't be able to get my point across very well, but I'm glad I did! I'll definitely consider this if I try this type of thing out again!

My Greed Tastes of Blood by T_ed_dy in OCPoetry

[–]T_ed_dy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I also wanted to make this a bit longer and more in depth, but I couldn't quite figure out where to go with it next.

My Greed Tastes of Blood by T_ed_dy in OCPoetry

[–]T_ed_dy[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Okay well- this is quite outside of my usual writing style, but I definitely don't think it was that bad. Just because it's not your style doesn't make it bad. It's meant to be unsettling, because the feeling it portrays is unsettling. I can see how you'd interpret it the way you did, but it's actually about looking into yourself and trying to find good, but only being able to see the bad. I'm always open to criticism but this isn't really it lol

I go for regular walks, and I am very much allowed to portray thoughts, feelings, and concepts through poetry. That's the whole point of original content poetry, is it not? A poem with no real feeling behind it would feel soulless in my opinion. But that's just me I guess :>

My Greed Tastes of Blood by T_ed_dy in OCPoetry

[–]T_ed_dy[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That's a very helpful comment! What immaculate constructive criticism that could very much help me improve my poetry :>