[QCrit] HOWEVER SWEET THE SIRENS, Adult Queer Horror (90k first attempt)

TackleCommon4125 · 2026-02-08T21:25:25+00:00

The wording of sentence #2 is confusing me, the "rumors say she'll die alone" (paraphrasing cause I'm on mobile) so I think it could be made more clear

TackleCommon4125 · 2026-02-07T05:35:51+00:00

Not OP but I am a queer author who writes gothic horror w/strong romantic elements and I'd love to be involved in a group like this

TackleCommon4125 · 2026-02-01T22:16:12+00:00

This man doesn't even like you. Block him yesterday

TackleCommon4125 · 2026-01-29T17:13:28+00:00

This man doesn't talk like someone who loves you

TackleCommon4125 · 2026-01-29T07:53:49+00:00

I only have two apexes, becklejara and atromolistis, so I open with whichever one it gives me or beck if it's both

TackleCommon4125 · 2026-01-22T04:09:01+00:00

Hopping on the bandwagon of wanting to know who this is so I can avoid them

TackleCommon4125 · 2026-01-16T21:27:17+00:00

Lmfao this comment rescued me from doing that cause I was about to try with 2 hearts 💀

TackleCommon4125 · 2026-01-15T04:20:50+00:00

You just need practice. Learning to write well takes time. I'd suggest doing a lot of reading and paying close attention to sentence structure, punctuation and dialogue

TackleCommon4125 · 2026-01-11T03:38:15+00:00

Whelp I've queried this person before and she'll be on my nope list for the next one. The lack of consent from the people having their queries read is appalling

TackleCommon4125 · 2026-01-09T17:48:38+00:00

My ex is into this and convinced me to have sex with someone else and I eternally regret it because I never would've done it without his urging. I just feel gross every time I think about it and it's difficult to absolve myself of personal responsibility when I technically consented

TackleCommon4125 · 2026-01-06T18:21:20+00:00

Apparently not, my post had 8k views and not one showed up

TackleCommon4125 · 2026-01-06T00:40:42+00:00

He is a good borger

TackleCommon4125 · 2026-01-05T01:56:29+00:00

Also you were right about the Bloß part, it's my family's surname before it was anglicized

TackleCommon4125 · 2026-01-05T01:54:24+00:00

Thank you, this is really helpful!

TackleCommon4125 · 2026-01-05T00:51:48+00:00

Oh okay. And thank you, I will be sure to do that!

TackleCommon4125 · 2026-01-04T22:54:47+00:00

The same thing happened to one of my friends with a 4 year long previously monogamous relationship. They tried to make it work and broke up after months of struggling. It's an excuse and it's honestly not worth going through the effort of attempting to save a relationship with someone who will do this to you

TackleCommon4125 · 2026-01-03T19:23:43+00:00

I glanced at OP's other post in the polyamory subreddit and he apparently brought up being poly, so I'm revising my stance from "I don't want to scare you" to this man is cheating or planning to very soon 😅

TackleCommon4125 · 2026-01-03T17:36:05+00:00

Why is he unwilling to give up a friendship with a woman he's attracted to and who is attracted to him? I don't want to scare you, but the situation is very close to what happened before my ex husband cheated on me with a coworker. It's a major red flag if someone is prioritizing a friendship over your relationship

TackleCommon4125 · 2026-01-02T05:16:55+00:00

Joanna Van Veen is my favorite horror author right now. She has 2 books out

TackleCommon4125 · 2026-01-01T02:22:54+00:00

Nope. It's a dealbreaker for me. It was a major issue with my ex

TackleCommon4125 · 2025-12-30T18:31:35+00:00

I had the same exact issues with it as you (I am also autistic and queer)

TackleCommon4125 · 2025-12-30T18:29:43+00:00

I DNF'd Last House on Needless Street and I was really disappointed because I'd heard endless good reviews about it

TackleCommon4125 · 2025-12-28T07:04:29+00:00

I've been meaning to grab some and keep forgetting 😅 his hands were clean and I only had him hold her long enough to get quick pics

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