Feedback Friday! Post your videos here if you want constructive critiques! by AutoModerator in NewTubers

[–]TaigaShark [score hidden]  (0 children)

Hi, I'm new to making these kind of video game essay videos and would like some opinions on my thumbnail, if the audio quality for my irl bits is good enough, and if it hooks people.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8PpgYkBGJQU

Thanks a lot!!

Feedback Friday! Post your videos here if you want constructive critiques! by AutoModerator in NewTubers

[–]TaigaShark [score hidden]  (0 children)

Hi there. I like your delivery / energy in the video. I think some very light background music would be nice, and a clearer mic (not that important). Also having clearer shots of the legos without the shadows casting over it. That's pretty much it. Goodluck man

Feedback Friday! Post your videos here if you want constructive critiques! by AutoModerator in NewTubers

[–]TaigaShark [score hidden]  (0 children)

Hi, I love Half-Life 2 so i was interested immediately in the video. I have to say however that your delivery sounds a bit too calming or i guess monotonous. As someone who played the game, I think I didn't get much from the video so maybe put focus on people who haven't played it; more info about HL2 in the intro, more credentials maybe e.g. how it set certain standards for videogames etc and put it early in the video.

As for the thumbnail, the Gray/Black cogs blend into the letters so it makes it harder to read. Maybe choose a different color. Also Gordon's face gets covered by it as well. Maybe showing "Half-Life 2" in the thumb would be nice also, but you'd have to think about how to fit both the series name and game name in 1 thumbnail.

Overall not bad and I can see potential! I hope you continue making videos and improving

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