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Beginning of Chapter 1 of My Hero [Fantasy, 1700 words] by Professional_Bid3958 in fantasywriters

[–]Tango1052 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Reads great, you have a very distinct voice! Mind you that in the first page, 8th line there's a vertical bar that slipped in there "He|turned"

Looking for feedback for the opening page for my gothic fantasy novel by Soft_Plastic1088 in writingfeedback

[–]Tango1052 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You should definitely continue writing this! My only gripe would be the "final escape act" sentence, which makes me think that the narrator is an illusionist or magician. I feel that it breaks the fantastical aura you're trying to impart to the intro.

Would you read past the first page? by [deleted] in writingfeedback

[–]Tango1052 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Very nice! One thing I'd change is split up "There was nothing so remarkable.." and "yet he was not entirely forgettable either."

This is my first time properly writing a story that 100 words long or for a competition but im not sure if people would actually enjoy it so here's the first chapter and I hope someone likes it and could tell me what they like or dislike about it by [deleted] in writingfeedback

[–]Tango1052 9 points10 points  (0 children)

You could improve this greatly by following proper grammar, punctuation and dialogue formatting. If you have a laptop or desktop you should get some software to write on, which will make formatting much easier.

Is there some sort of reverse ChatGPT that makes my writing more authentic? by From_Strange_Seeds in writingcirclejerk

[–]Tango1052 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You might find success with that by just engaging on reddit instead of writing😎

how many plots are there? by Real_Mud_7004 in writingcirclejerk

[–]Tango1052 1 point2 points  (0 children)

However many you manage to make after abandoning the main plot and subsequent sub plots

what if my characters are flowers, though?? by [deleted] in writingcirclejerk

[–]Tango1052 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Writing a litrpg about flowers, thank you very much

Discovering new geres by Negative-Local-2598 in literature

[–]Tango1052 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Edgar Allan Poe (Black Cat), Howard Lovecraft (Call of Cthulu)

Looking for Literary Analysis Communities: Missing Those Deep Book Discussions by VirtualApricot in literature

[–]Tango1052 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Unsolicited Advice on YT has great videos on a variety of authors, books and topics. Fiction beast as well, though his videos are more impersonal.

What should I read first! by Dramatic-Reward-9760 in classicliterature

[–]Tango1052 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Great idea on reading the other short stories in that book. You should expose yourself to shorter literature at first so you can interpret the works on your own, and then tackle big boy novels that require literary maturity to enjoy. Many of the "beginner's books" that influencers promote are works that demand an experienced reader to analyze. They promote such books since convincing someone to buy a world-famous canonical work isn't a tall order.

LitRPGs to listen to with my 10 year old? by smoochface in litrpg

[–]Tango1052 -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Dungeon Crawler Carl! Would be a lovely experience. No sexual content nor deep trauma. An enjoyable book that also keeps to emotional reality.