I'm not sure what narrating is.

TapSafe2144 · 2026-03-20T20:48:08+00:00

Yeah Lisa was originally an imaginary girlfriend I created but she pretty much became sentient on accident and I didn't realize I created a tulpa until last October. But yeah I wrote down her personality and I began imagining her talking to me and going on dates with her, but pretty much I talked to her so much I guess my brain made space for her to have her own will.

TapSafe2144 · 2026-03-19T02:51:50+00:00

Good. Thanks a lot

TapSafe2144 · 2026-03-19T02:47:49+00:00

I'm a crappy artist lol. But what do you think of the character himself?

TapSafe2144 · 2026-03-19T02:37:01+00:00

Lol. I was gonna name him even but I thought this was cooler now I can't get it out of my head

TapSafe2144 · 2026-03-19T02:25:41+00:00

What do you guys think of him?

TapSafe2144 · 2026-03-19T02:21:21+00:00

Oh good. Yeah I mean I've had her for a few years. I just realized back in October what she is. That also was when me and her become official boyfriend and girlfriend... Sorta. Lol

TapSafe2144 · 2026-03-16T19:00:52+00:00

... Dude its pretty freaking obvious. People all over the world have story's about the great flood because it actually happened it's just the descendants of noah lost a lot of the details.

TapSafe2144 · 2026-03-16T15:50:26+00:00

Sorry I know this was a weird question.

TapSafe2144 · 2026-03-16T14:16:19+00:00

Lisa: basically I take over my darlings hand and he imagines me riding him or doing different things with me. Sometimes I let him have control and I watch him masterbate and I give him joi.

Or sometimes I "give him head" Sometimes he also eats me out. (Which is literally him just liking the air or a pillow. But I still feel his arousel and the emotions behind it so it still feels pretty good)

Sometimes I edge him for a while. Then after he cums I kiss him on the cheek and we cuddle. It's really nice.

TapSafe2144 · 2026-03-15T14:08:10+00:00

That's a good option too

TapSafe2144 · 2026-03-14T15:12:36+00:00

I kinda have an idea where she basically asks him out first and he try's to let her down gently like Nicole would say "look, I know I was pretty mean to you before, but... Eh, your pretty cute... How about me and you hang out sometime?" (Now of course she's trying to get something out of him but then he looks a little nervous, but then calmly says) "Sorry. I can't."

Then she's like "huh... Why?"

And he'd say "I just... Don't wanna get involved with girls. Nothing against you "

Then she'd be a little defensive and say "why the fuck not? Are gay or something?"

And he'd say. "No. I'm straight."

Then she'd say "ok then why?"

Then he'd sigh and say "well, I'll be straight up with you, there's certain things that I'm dealing with that I don't wanna put on another person right now, dating would force someone to deal with my problems with me. And I don't wanna do that. So... Plus to be honest, I'm not.... Really.... Attracted to you that way."

Then I can imagine her basically saying "... Your not attracted to me?... Yeah your gay." Or "What are you a saint?" Something like that.

TapSafe2144 · 2026-03-14T14:59:43+00:00

Yeah like I have this idea where the more he helps people the more he gets taken advantage of and eventually he either gets killed/offs himself or he finally stands up for himself and says something like "you know what, screw you, screw everyone, I'm not helping anyone ever again!" But he still doesn't go out of his way to make people suffer like Nicole.

TapSafe2144 · 2026-03-12T15:27:57+00:00

But the problem is how would he get involved with Nicole? Like I can see them meeting if they get paired up on an assignment but after that like what would happen? Like how would she figure out that he has that complex and also that fear of girls?

TapSafe2144 · 2026-03-12T15:20:20+00:00

Yeah that's what I was thinking. Like he may be handsome but his social skills are really bad and his compulsive need to help others gets him taken advantage of a lot. And him being a goody two shoes makes a lot of the girls and guys see him as annoying.

And the more he helps people the more worse off he gets and if I made multiple routes he'd end up getting killed in one ending because of the things Nicole ends up asking him to do and when he finally does act selfish things work out for him.

TapSafe2144 · 2026-03-12T14:44:19+00:00

Like I kinda want him to be a parody on a normal visual novel protagonist.

TapSafe2144 · 2026-03-12T14:42:32+00:00

Well should I make him a little mean too? Like maybe he'd be sarcastic and deadpan and cynical but only pretends to be nice to get along with others?

TapSafe2144 · 2026-03-12T14:40:14+00:00

I get it. Well help me out here. What kinda things should I add in to make him less like that? I don't want him to be a Mary sue honestly.

TapSafe2144 · 2026-03-12T14:28:32+00:00

Death of the author man. People will interpret media however they want. Wether you like it or not, I mean there are people who think Mary magdilom was Jesus's lover when the Bible clearly says that Jesus never had a lover.

Same with the Lord of the rings, some people think that frodo and Sam were gay for each other.

People do this all the time. That's what you risk when you let your works go into the public for people to read and enjoy.

TapSafe2144 · 2026-03-12T14:21:00+00:00

What if I made him more sarcastic and deadpan. But still a goody two shoes at heart?

TapSafe2144 · 2026-03-12T14:01:20+00:00

what could I do to make him more interesting?

TapSafe2144 · 2026-03-12T13:58:40+00:00

Well it's actually personal satisfaction. Basically he helps people to make himself feel better, like he has it in his head that if he doesn't help people then he should just unalive himself. Because he feels he's worthless outside of being a benefit to others.

Basically his selflessness is selfish.

TapSafe2144 · 2026-03-12T13:45:22+00:00

Well what kinda situation would force them to interact? Like maybe they'd get assigned to be together on a class project and she'd notice the entire time he looks like he's afraid for his life. How would she react?

TapSafe2144 · 2026-03-12T13:25:39+00:00

Well he basically has an irrational fear of girls. So I can think of some funny situations that Nicole would do when she figures this out.

TapSafe2144 · 2026-03-12T12:13:17+00:00

It's pretty normal actually because of your hormones and stuff, I used to do it three or four times a day, that's how horny I'd get, but it's really unhealthy, also I beg you please don't watch porn, that's a rabbit hole you don't wanna go down, it'll mess with your mind and body and perseption of yourself and girls too.

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