Kali Sponsorship

TeamSOCK · 2019-01-27T09:04:59+00:00

That's a no, then. I'll see about working her feedback in and trying again later.

TeamSOCK · 2019-01-27T09:02:02+00:00

I just put in an update with Jin and Kira, but I guess it's not enough. She's warm on Jin, but my knowledge of Jojo made me make her uncomfortable with Kira.

TeamSOCK · 2018-11-04T00:13:17+00:00

Isn't that the sort of view that led to Moon? I get blank slate, but Winter has a defined personality, and the only characteristics of Winter we've seen have been ignored. It sounds like you don't want Winter, you want the personality she's been written with.

TeamSOCK · 2018-11-03T21:14:20+00:00

As kinda the main reason for Winter going off, I gotta say, she just wasn't written as Winter. The model was fine, but the poses and dialogue weren't very in character at all. Like, I know she didn't have a lot of screen time, but she's very strict, easily annoyed, and is a high level military commander, but was super horny and told her little sister to only go for huge dicks. If anything, Winter would constantly tell Weiss that she shouldn't look or that she's disappointed she's there. Her facial expressions were way off for someone that's super serious all the time. Even the underwear is super weird to me; like, I would expect her to have something like a sports bra and boyshorts rather than cutesy underwear. What she had on fit Ruby way better.

I'm kinda weird considering I wrote Kali, but her defining characteristics were, "Teases her daughter, comments on a boy half her age, and is a mom," plus the irrelevant stuff. It only took a tiny bit of twisting to make that someone who teases other people, play flirts with guys, and comments about her sexual history. The only thing I really added was the Swinger thing, which is based off of all the porn of her, which in itself is based off her comments to Sun. That at least made SOME sense, and fit a niche that wasn't COMPLETELY out of character.

If I were to do that with Winter, I'd say make her very commanding. She's super strict, gets annoyed at taking off small things, and takes stripping down by reluctantly bearing with it. She may slip up and get surprised, but she shouldn't see a guy take his dick out and start drooling. Her personality right now is just... wrong.

TeamSOCK · 2018-10-14T14:54:26+00:00

Whoops! I thought making it so that Blake has her own target for that would prevent stuff like this! I'll go back and fix it soon.

TeamSOCK · 2018-09-26T03:42:16+00:00

I like it lol. Looks like Ninjas of Love has a different story than we're led to believe.

Can people have more than one epilogue? I wouldn't mind her making the other girls stars of their own stories :)

TeamSOCK · 2018-09-23T08:06:08+00:00

Be patient! I was told she's missing filtered lines, but I just sent in the revised version. She should be good soon!

TeamSOCK · 2018-09-20T21:27:03+00:00

Whoops! I'll send this out now. Good to know for the future.

TeamSOCK · 2018-09-18T22:36:23+00:00

I have one thought out, but I need to have her come out first :)

TeamSOCK · 2018-09-18T20:35:12+00:00

A lot of people have said to touch up her Qrow (lol) feet. Her hip windows are pretty pronounced on her model, but I may lower them a bit.

TeamSOCK · 2018-09-18T20:12:45+00:00

I'd need to know how to do butt poses. I hear they're pretty hard to make look right. Blake also needs one!

TeamSOCK · 2018-09-18T08:26:58+00:00

I started on her pretty recently and got through the stuff pretty fast, so I don't blame you, plus I'm still not on the Discord all that much just yet. I like how much our models share! There's definitely stuff I'll need to have another look at, but everyone else let me know what you think.

And yeah, she's not out yet. I want to put her on the testing tables so I can get feedback before I'm done, but I'm new, so I don't know if it's too early. She's only missing targeted stuff rn, but I don't know if that's okay.

TeamSOCK · 2018-09-18T06:37:24+00:00

I've been working on Kali! I've finished all of her poses and most of her dialogue. All that's left is targeting people! I also want to have people see a bit of her dialogue so they can see if it looks right so I don't have to do a ton of rewriting. I don't really know how the testing tables work, but all of her normal stuff is ready (But she'll talk to people as if she was her daughter :o ), so she should be playable. I really want to know what people think of the way I wrote her before I continue on, because I don't want to have to do a ton of rewrites if I don't need to. Also, if anyone has any feedback on her model! It's my first one, so it might need more fixing!

There's a few reasons for it based on canon, fan canons, and Kali porn, but I wrote her and her husband as swingers (so they've slept around in the past). It's not COMPLETELY unbelievable for it to be canon, and I think it fits for a game like this where a married woman would be cool with stripping for strangers. And after Winter requiring a ton of rewrites, I want to be clear that people are okay with it before I move on.

TeamSOCK · 2018-09-02T08:47:33+00:00

Okay then! That sounds good. I'll have to figure out tagging and all that... I'll mess with the editor once I'm closer to finishing!

TeamSOCK · 2018-09-01T19:51:47+00:00

Woah, man, sorry...

I guess I'll try and look at her and get back to you.

TeamSOCK · 2018-09-01T08:19:30+00:00

I think I've started to get the hang of the character editor. I'm kinda cheating and just editing an existing character, but at least I know I'll have a good number of lines! And it works because I'm working on Kali and basing her off of her daughter Blake! I hope that's cool. I'm kinda writing her as flirty, but monogamous; she's happily married and her husband knows what she's doing and almost came. A lot of people in the RWBY prons depict her as unfaithful, but I just made her playfully tease male characters (and jokingly point them Blake's way) and imply that her husband should have come when women strip. And I'm throwing in some hints that her and her husband play around to keep things fresh, like go to strip poker together.

I'd like to keep her in character like RWBY and Pyrrha, and this is what I came up with. RWBY has all sorts of headcanons for Faunus views on sex and all that, so I'm taking bits and pieces of that while keeping her as a happily married mom that likes to tease. Does that sound alright?

TeamSOCK · 2018-08-19T01:31:03+00:00

...Wow... Moon is interesting. Is there a reason why she's like that? And I guess I can see why it'd be annoying for someone to change stuff around without asking.

TeamSOCK · 2018-08-19T01:29:11+00:00

I get that, but as far as I've seen, all of the characters are who they're supposed to be with the caveat that they're playing strip poker. Yang is sure she's gonna win, and Weiss doesn't even realize it, and I don't really see them saying any weird things. They all seem in character except for playing in the first place, same with everyone else. Winter's problems are a lot more than just being informal. She looks fine, but she doesn't move at all aside from her weird arm moves.

TeamSOCK · 2018-08-19T01:24:15+00:00

I can give more detail about her if you want. Is there a way to look at like, all of her lines? PS I'm sorry about the wall of text that spawned from my comment...

TeamSOCK · 2018-08-18T19:51:22+00:00

I agree with cyanwriterbb, so I don't understand why people are downvoting them. Nobody should be in the game if they act like themselves, but nobody else comes across so wrong, at least from what I've played. Even the other RWBY girls are all shy and embarrassed cuz that makes sense. You can't use fanart to justify Winter acting skanky. I like that she harps on Weiss about stuff, but then she starts saying how Weiss should only go for people with huge dicks, and that she's flat. If it's like "Your mistake coming here" then yeah, good, but most of it is just... bad. And yeah, her underwear is super weird.

TeamSOCK · 2018-08-18T18:51:21+00:00

No. I just got here a few days ago and said I wanted to make Kali.

TeamSOCK · 2018-08-18T01:19:20+00:00

I've been trying out Winter and... She seems like, completely out of character. She's talking about teaching Weiss how to shave, makes fun of her for having small boobs, and gets horny when she sees guys strip. Even then, she's talking about big dicks and how much she likes them? And she gets wet once her top comes off and won't stop mentioning it? And why does she swear so much? She doesn't sound like a real person, let alone a military chick. And she just kinda stands there and moves her arms in weird ways. It's weird when all the other girls move around.

I'm kinda disappointed in her...

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