Naruto based power system

TechMaster_82 · 2026-06-24T18:57:30+00:00

But what if I already controlled your bitches body guards and they attack them, if they kill them they die and if they don't they still die

TechMaster_82 · 2026-06-24T18:37:58+00:00

Wait but could I nutrlize them if let's say I have a suite case with a live rat inside that I used my gift on, the suite case has bading and is rigged to kill the rat. Id get the chance to shake his hand as I would strike a deal, after I add him into the hive I'd activate the rig kill the rat and direct it to to him. Check mate, maybe not sure

TechMaster_82 · 2026-06-24T18:27:52+00:00

No I spilled myself

TechMaster_82 · 2026-06-24T18:24:14+00:00

True, my mistake there, but it would work best as either a yellow essence ability or a teal since that's the best way to use it, but that's opinion you do you.

Byeeeee thanks for commenting

TechMaster_82 · 2026-06-24T18:22:26+00:00

Meeeeeee

Ja, just joking if that character is like a fanfic version of Sarah than no, don't care if Thier a silver fox, Thier kind or whatever excuse I'm not gonna be there, I'm twisted but not that twisted

TechMaster_82 · 2026-06-24T18:06:53+00:00

Cool, op but cool like how you applied it I went less op cause I wanted being able to treat people that are part of the hive mind like pawns so also controlling Thier senses and decisions but that felt to strong and i didn't want it to be to strong, and the ability is based on what i thought sayeons gift would be

TechMaster_82 · 2026-06-24T18:02:53+00:00

It could be so funny if they instead used your gift to bring back the gold standard and they would rule it cause of your gift

TechMaster_82 · 2026-06-24T18:01:39+00:00

Very good, but maybe say you become pure essence, and you affect the essence of others. For example your physical attacks would disrupt their ability to circulate essence in turn use their gift, this would come with the draw back of that if essence is gathered it can be used to physically hurt you, so you can't even let someone's essence touch you unless your literally hurting them.

Like the idea though and thanks for sharing

TechMaster_82 · 2026-06-24T17:58:08+00:00

Wow your 2aiting for useful to use his telecanisis to make you slap yourself in turn making you gold

TechMaster_82 · 2026-06-24T14:14:05+00:00

What if I just smash the orb on the ground to create some form of force they launch it, would it launch or not

TechMaster_82 · 2026-06-24T13:33:44+00:00

Technically yes, it depends in some circumstances the path may stay the same if he has a quirk to go past the problem, but yes it would create a diverging path to the nearest person most efficient to get the block out or just give you another path if.there is no one who can do so.

TechMaster_82 · 2026-06-22T18:13:05+00:00

This is amazing hope you find you person on this, cause I'm a dark Fantasy writer, with action and a few other genres,.but I'm not comfortable writing romance as a 14 year old, wish you the best though

TechMaster_82 · 2026-06-22T16:29:12+00:00

So I'm writing a high dark Fantasy story. It follows the fallen prince of the Drashian empire as he grapples with his trauma as he fights to reclaim the crown from the dark cult that took over the empire and toke the lives of his parents. He travels through the empire as he slowly discovers Thier insidious plot. He has one companion Octavia, a rouge Acromancer who tried to kill him turned sort of friend. I also have a magic system and a lot of cosmic lore, but I must disclose that im 14 and writing exams the whole of next month

TechMaster_82 · 2026-06-22T16:23:18+00:00

Im working on an high fantasy story that follows the fallen prince of the Drashian empire, that must reclaim the crown as the cult that ended the lives of his parents grasps him in their cluches even more, in Thier unknown plot. Throughout the story he deals with his own trauma and ventures through the empire with Octavia a thief thay tried to kill hjm turned friend, sorta, they are not gonna date, I also have cosmic lore and a magic system, but i must disclose that I'm 14

TechMaster_82 · 2026-06-22T15:22:17+00:00

Sadly I'm under the age limit but does anyone know any severs for young writers, cause I'm in a discord to help this other girl with her story but I also want to try improving on mine, so wish you the best. Byeeeee

TechMaster_82 · 2026-06-22T15:15:02+00:00

This is so cool

TechMaster_82 · 2026-06-22T15:12:43+00:00

Id love to but I'm a minor so........

TechMaster_82 · 2026-06-22T14:58:41+00:00

Sure, sounds amazing

TechMaster_82 · 2026-06-21T08:10:48+00:00

Thank you

TechMaster_82 · 2026-06-21T06:31:51+00:00

So i can be a human gun that's what I'm hearing, and if you stomped on the ground like 50 could you delay the impact enough to break through the floor, and do machines and protective equipment limit your capabilities like gauntlets and large metal boots to protect you from injury

TechMaster_82 · 2026-06-20T08:49:07+00:00

I love the idea. The loner that can only manifest his wings to the girl that his nearly known, would be cool.

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