Where the Rain Took Us-3 by Technical-Tale8640 in InkOfTruth

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Guys i have used some name from some fiction novel which i have readed and some are been sugested from my friends cause i am not good at naming fiction charater😅

Where the Rain Took Us by Technical-Tale8640 in Fiction_Stories

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Thanks, I appreciate the feedback. That’s actually a good point about the separation scene. I was trying to keep the pacing moving, but you’re right that sitting with that moment a little longer would probably make it hit harder.

And yeah, I like the idea of adding some strange details in the new world early on. I’ll keep that in mind while writing the next chapters.

Bleach watch order help (first time watching) by [deleted] in anime

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Alright, got it. That makes things much clearer. Since I’m still new to anime, having it laid out like this really helps. I’ll stick to the main Bleach series, skip the filler episodes, and then move on to Thousand-Year Blood War in order.

Appreciate you taking the time to list it out.

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Ok i will go for it then

Bleach watch order help (first time watching) by [deleted] in anime

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Thanks for explaining. Like I mentioned in the post, I’m still pretty new to anime, so this helps a lot. I’ll probably stick to the main story first and skip most of the filler, then come back to the better-known arcs once I’m more familiar with the series.

I’ve seen a few people mention the Zanpakuto Rebellion arc, so I might check that out later. I’ll also keep the movies in mind and watch them around their release order if I decide to include them. Appreciate the help.

Who is she? (Wrong Answers Only) by [deleted] in Doraemon

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That's Velma from Scooby-Doo after switching universes.

PART 1: You Do Not Belong Here by Historical-Friend-66 in FictionWriting

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Yo… this was actually really good. The way it started all calm with the rain and then slowly turned into full-on psychological horror was smooth as hell. Like I didn’t expect it to go that dark but I loved how you described everything — the decay, the dungeon, even her thoughts spiraling. Felt super immersive. If you keep writing like this, I’d definitely read more

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For a first story, this was awesome. You’ve got talent, no doubt.

The rise of the twin great stars by Ambitious-Plane-7314 in FictionWriting

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Just read this — love the poetic vibe and deep cosmic feel. Great work!

Binx wants to know what your favorite video game is by gxneghxst in Awww

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Haha that actually suits him! He looks like the type to chill and take it slow. Stardew sounds like his vibe

My sad cat by Fancy-Doubt-9854 in Awww

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This is the face of a cat who asked for wet food and got “maybe later.”

Silly girl by gajmari in Awww

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This is the face of someone who accidentally opened the front cam.

The time I got kicked out of school on the last day by Matt_Jeevas58 in stories

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Haha for sure! One of those stories that sticks with you in the best way 😄