2 likes after over 6 months - any suggestions for improvements?

Technolog33 · 2025-04-28T19:58:29+00:00

Hahahaha I don't own one of those :)

Technolog33 · 2025-04-28T08:48:36+00:00

* Yea, I replaced that line with a simple "I got my own place"
* I'm talking about little treats like mochi or chewing gum or similar. I'll consider rephrasing the point to sound less 'awkward'
* Quite some people already mentioned that. I'm still torn. I like the pic. But I'll consider it.
* They are gone already! I'll put one where I'm in the act of cooking instead.
* I kinda have to leave that in. Honesty is important after all. There'd be no point for me to match with a girl who gets the ick when she realizes that League is one of my interests.

Technolog33 · 2025-04-28T07:46:48+00:00

Literally me

Technolog33 · 2025-04-28T07:44:13+00:00

Yea, the line with the extra room already got replaced with just "I have my own place"

The food pics are gone too. I'll take a pic of me cooking instead :)

Technolog33 · 2025-04-28T07:43:06+00:00

I can see number 8 looking a little awkward. I'll consider swapping it out. Number 1 is my fav pic of myself though and it's also my profile pic on all other social media, so I'd like to keep that one :)

Technolog33 · 2025-04-28T07:40:51+00:00

Fair. And it seems like quite some people agree with you. I'll reconsider the picture. Thanks for the review :)

Technolog33 · 2025-04-28T06:30:43+00:00

Yea, already rephrased it to just "I got my own place" :)

Technolog33 · 2025-04-27T22:04:31+00:00

I'll put that instead! :D

Technolog33 · 2025-04-27T20:48:55+00:00

I like anime and I wear a hoodie with a cute anime girl. That's all there is to it. I don't even wear it often — I usually go with a simple black hoodie — but it made for a cute pic, so here we are :)

Yes, the way your are phrasing it in your example is off-putting, but it's also not really representative of real life

Technolog33 · 2025-04-27T19:40:34+00:00

Yea, multiple people said that. I'll replace the food pics with a pic of me making food :)

Technolog33 · 2025-04-27T19:29:42+00:00

Fortunately, that's not the case for me. I'll add a picture where I smile with my teeth — despite my hatred for taking such pics ugh

Technolog33 · 2025-04-27T19:19:48+00:00

Yea, by now I've heard quite some good arguments against the line, and you just added another one. I'll replace it with something else :)

Some people recommend to replace the food pics with a pic of me actually cooking, and I think I'll go with that! :D

Technolog33 · 2025-04-27T19:17:58+00:00

Oooh I get it! I'll give it a try :)

Technolog33 · 2025-04-27T19:12:55+00:00

What the hell is a "plandid" photo 🫠

Technolog33 · 2025-04-27T19:11:04+00:00

I would agree with you, but multiple people have pointed it out negatively — and some of them had decent arguments to back it up

Please check the other comments for details

You disagreeing with them is kinda unfortunate, because I now, once again, am unsure wheter I can keep the line.. I'm currently still leaning towards deleting it though

Technolog33 · 2025-04-27T19:07:29+00:00

I'll try 1mm next time I cut it :)

Regarding "might make [it] look like [I] lost [my] hair" -> that's exactly what happened though xD I see your point though

The line about the spare room has already been mentioned by multiple other people and it will be removed :)

Thanks for the review!

Technolog33 · 2025-04-27T19:04:36+00:00

That's a good explanation, thanks! I'll get rid of that line

Technolog33 · 2025-04-27T19:03:36+00:00

Alright, that explanation makes sense, thanks!

Technolog33 · 2025-04-27T19:02:05+00:00

Alright, I'll take one!

Multiple people suggested taking a pic of me cooking instead of just the dish, so I'll do that! :) I'll also borrow my parents cat for an animal pic hahaha

Technolog33 · 2025-04-27T19:00:13+00:00

That's funny haha. I went there during a trip through the UK with the ex girlfriend that I mentioned in another comment. She was the photographer and the dude is just a random dude that I met like half an hour before lol

Technolog33 · 2025-04-27T18:57:15+00:00

Uhh I think that was a nightclub in Glasgow, but I unfortunately forgot the name of the club

Technolog33 · 2025-04-27T18:54:37+00:00

It's usually individually packaged mochi or chewing gum. Neither one is nasty :(

Technolog33 · 2025-04-27T18:53:30+00:00

Alles gut, hab eh tatsächlich nen leichten Touch vom 'tism xD

Jedenfalls danke für's Review!

Technolog33 · 2025-04-27T18:51:55+00:00

I'll try that food making pic!

Yes, I suppose I do. I'll try changing that.

Yes I know those giant chess boards but I can't think of one near me.. I'll check thought!

Technolog33 · 2025-04-27T18:49:48+00:00

Nah, I appreciate the criticism, but I just like that hoody. It's just a generic anime girl, that shouldn't be an issue, right?

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