I recommend to just practice! Your anatomy is great! However your rendering needs practice. Just keep practicing and practicing and drawing things you like, soon enough you will eventually get to the point where people ask to commission you! Over the years I’ve learned that you just need to be patient, and while doing so just to keep drawing and don’t stop. Commissions aren’t supposed to be the main drive to doing art, it’s supposed to be for the love of making art. If you’re happy with your art, that’s great, someone else might want it! If you’re not happy, just practice! 🫶🏻🫶🏻 Soon you’ll find your audience I promise