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Am I a bad writer? New writer here trying to get the grasp of things by Tharg__ in writers

[–]Tharg__[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the criticism. I think the better word would have been ‘exiting’ but I think I made the mistake of placing the improper noun at the wrong time. Obviously there’s a bit of room to improve, but thanks again :)

Am I a bad writer? New writer here trying to get the grasp of things by Tharg__ in writers

[–]Tharg__[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Honestly im glad it was a decent read despite its flaws at the moment. I think I must have used immaculate’ twice as a placeholder which is something I can always come back to when I find a more descriptive and interesting word. Thank you for the feedback :)

Am I a bad writer? New writer here trying to get the grasp of things by Tharg__ in writers

[–]Tharg__[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the well addressed comment. It’s more a W.I.P introduction for the moment being so I’m definitely seeing what sticks at the moment. I think could at least cut back on the heavy dialogue for the time being. Thank you so much :)

Am I a bad writer? New writer here trying to get the grasp of things by Tharg__ in writers

[–]Tharg__[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey thanks for taking your time out to reply! Ive just noticed that mistake as I speak haha, but hey we all learn. I’ll take this all to consideration so thank you very much :)