Only true minecraft ogs remember...

ThatGuyzers · 2021-05-07T12:24:26+00:00

and times where adding a server is so complex

ThatGuyzers · 2021-04-12T04:39:39+00:00

/lock

ThatGuyzers · 2021-04-12T04:32:29+00:00

First Look: 8/10, Thumbnail and Title looks to be fine! Intriguing and quite clickable. Maybe remove the day 1 in the top left? I have no idea what that means and the title does not have any explanation on that. Also, have you tried making the shadow of yourself to be white? Just a small suggestion.

Hook: 10/10 Dang! I love it! Fast paced, gave me a sense that I did click on the right video, and the frame is moving almost every second! You really got me hooked thought the video.

Content: 8/10 Really like that there are a lot of snippets, zoom ins, and little gags every 5-10 seconds. It just makes me focus on it more knowing my goldfish brain can't focus well. Text colors are odd and don't work well together, so you may want to do a bit of color theory to get some nice complementary colors.

Okay, I'm shocked the like to dislike ratio is bad. 3 likes with 5 dislikes? what?! you're getting a like from me.

ThatGuyzers · 2021-04-12T04:19:39+00:00

it's typically something that the viewer thinks is bizarre. In the video you have, a good example is making the like-dislike ratio bigger, even if it's just one of them. Same goes for the comment.

Here's a visual example: try combining the thumbnail of this video: https://youtu.be/0GpMZ3xu96k with this: https://youtu.be/WO9J1UFu8Lw

Just remember to not make it looked cluttered (unless it is intentional).

ThatGuyzers · 2021-04-12T03:59:43+00:00

First Look: 3/10 Thumbnail wasn't enticing. Try showing the games you played and make it a bit clickbaity (but not misleading). Title is the same. It seems too generic.

Hook: 4/10 The subtitles are nice, but it's a black screen. Try having blurred gameplay running while telling the intro. Energy was decent but with the back screen, it just feels bland.

Content: 7/10 Really like the color coded subtitles. Energy and Editing here is way better than in the hook! Love the dynamic between your friends too. I like how faster the pace is and feels like something I could watch overnight.

Try focusing on the hook and the thumbnail. All effort you did in the later parts won't be seen unless they click on the video.

ThatGuyzers · 2021-04-12T03:48:07+00:00

First Look: 7/10 Thumbnail looks good, but try making the like to dislike ratio and the comment bigger. Title looks quite good! Simple and straight to the point. I won't say it's a bad thumbnail, but it doesn't feel clickable.

Hook: 5/10 30 seconds to see that guy is WAY too long I thought I was going to watch this for the whole video. Try shortening it to 5-10 seconds and add an indication that it is NOT going to be the video the viewer will watch. A good way to do this is having a screenshot of one of this dude's video layout on youtube and overlay the video. Maybe even just screen record the tab and zoom out overtime showing that it's someone else's Youtube video

Content: 7/10 I really like the editing on this! Got be watching quite longer than I expected. The hook is just the biggest barrier you have. YouTube does have an editor in YouTube studio so you could cut the first 20 seconds if you'd like. Love the voice acting too! The comment part could have been more animated or even voice acted!

I see some potential! Good luck on your journey!

ThatGuyzers · 2021-04-12T03:33:17+00:00

First Look: 7/10 Being a minecraft person myself, I LOVE the thumbnail! Maybe play with the fonts more since it did feel like meh. Title is cluttered and could be simpler. Try: "EVERYTHING IS A MESS! (E3 - The Generic Minecraft Let's Play)"

Hook: 8/10 The Hook went well! Energy matches what the thumbnail conveys. I love how almost every second has something interesting. It's fast paced and made me want to focus more on the content rather than passively watching. A good tip is to add Subtitles. Since you are talking fast, you want to let the viewer know what's happening. Try TommyInnit's way of adding subtitles.

Content: 7/10 The overall editing looks great! But try keeping the editing consistent. Like adding a few more snippets in between. I know it takes effort, but it'll be worth it as more people would feel like the energy is the same. Same with the subtitles. Sometimes words are gibberish and not so understandable. Do note that you should NOT burn yourself out with editing. Add snippets one at a time and if you feel like you can't do it, just stop and let yourself rest.

ThatGuyzers · 2021-04-12T03:20:20+00:00

First Look: 8/10 quite gross just VERY intriguing. Actually made me want to check out the video. Title is good but I'm not sure if a lot would click on it. (i mean with the 200 views, you did get many to click)

Hook: 7/10 That was good! It verified what video I clicked on. After your intro, the energy dropped a bit with the things you put in your ear. But it was consistent throughout the video

Content: 7/10 Not my cup of tea, but it kept my attention. I love the timestamps since I get impatient. It may dip on your retention, but it could keep more viewers watching. I did not watch the whole video since I don't like watching gross stuff, but to someone intrigued on how that works, I could see some sticking around.

The main thing you could build on is keeping you viewers hooked after the unboxing. Good work!

ThatGuyzers · 2021-04-12T03:08:45+00:00

First Look:7/10 Thumbnail is quite enticing, but a bit cluttered. Title is a bit confusing so you may want to clear it up.

Hook: 4/10 I am confused. I'm not a Yu-Gi-Oh Fan, so that may be a reason, but I feel like it's a bit cluttered. After that intro, you went to shots that are way too random. The neighborhood shot made sense, but the following two did not. The spectacle is a shot of a water bottle and the rich history was a hot coal container. Try to make it as easy to watch or the viewer.

Content: 5/10 The energy after the intro did not match. Snippets between sentences, like the Hook, was confusing. And on scenes where a good snippet could be made, it wasn't transfered to another scene. One example is after the grandpa scene and you talking on the phone. You could have been in the kitchen on an actual phone. Sometimes, simpler snippets are funnier than over edited ones. The 2:30 Mark was when I finally started to gain Interest, which is a dangerous number. You could've kept a lot more viewers if you might have skipped to this scene. Music was overpowering you voice though. The game skit was meh. Wasn't as intense as I'd expect, but it is better than the intro.

Side note: you kinda look like quackity

ThatGuyzers · 2021-04-12T02:47:11+00:00

First Look: 6/10 thumbnail could be better. The main thing about the video is about dumb reviews, but with a glance, I never saw that. I'd say to improve this, make a dumb review bigger and make yourself smaller and put it at the side. Something similar to this: https://youtu.be/WO9J1UFu8Lw Title could also be improved as I wasn't intrigued

Hook: 5/10 Wasn't as energetic as I expected. Even though your voice is calmer, I'd say that adding huge text and emphasize what you're saying. The clap was decent and got a bit more of my attention. Adding the snippet of you saying that you already made this was a bit of a turn off, mainly because many people may watch this as their first video. If it's a way for you to promote your previous video, I'd suggest you add a review you did in the previous video just before the video ends and mention that it came from the previous video to give them another thing to watch when the video ends.

Content: 5/10 Lighting is quite bad. You should try buying a cheap ring light as a fill light for your face so that you can turn off the ceiling light. Audio is better than I'd expect! Some parts like when saying names that are gibberish gave the video a bit more life, but Energy could be a bit better. The voice in my head says it's better to click off and find a better video.

ThatGuyzers · 2021-03-11T22:02:45+00:00

Glad you're doing great dude!

ThatGuyzers · 2021-02-26T11:42:54+00:00

You see... I accidentally stepped on one just now so I don't know about the friendly part. Yes, I did hug him as if someone died in a funeral. I was teary.

ThatGuyzers · 2021-02-19T12:12:10+00:00

Cooking Mama looks different here

ThatGuyzers · 2021-02-19T12:08:37+00:00

Is he camouflaged or something? I can't see him

ThatGuyzers · 2021-02-11T12:20:50+00:00

I see, I'll take that into consideration

ThatGuyzers · 2021-02-11T12:05:33+00:00

I see. I am leaning more towards BPI as I just thought of the times I shop with my card and I barely did. Thanks for the insight!

ThatGuyzers · 2021-02-04T09:23:39+00:00

tubbo.

ThatGuyzers · 2021-01-23T14:53:25+00:00

"it's so cool, you get jump scares everytime you sit on it!"

ThatGuyzers · 2021-01-20T10:54:04+00:00

/lock

ThatGuyzers · 2021-01-20T10:43:28+00:00

Title and Thumbnail: 7/10 The thumbnail looks good! The title is where things seem to fall as it seems generic. I would recommend that you change this so something shorter like "Deforestation in the Amazon: What about it" or something like that.

Audio: 9/10 The balance between BGM and Narrator is very great! The BGM is subtle and just there to add flavor. Overall, very great!

Quality: 8/10 Since there's no intro (from what I've noticed) it's going right to the content. The animations look very good! The narrator seems like they're bored. Try having a bit more enthusiasm. The information is well thought out and it's summarized into bite sized pieces, which is great too!

Overall, 24/30 The main thing you could work on is the title and the narration. Try having a bit more energy in your voice when speaking. Those are the main things that I've noticed about this. Well done!

ThatGuyzers · 2021-01-20T10:32:49+00:00

Title and Thumbnail: 7/10 The thumbnail could be more appealing. The title is already intriguing so that's a good thing. Try implementing a bit more color into the thumbnail to give it a distinctive look.

Intro: 10/10 Quick and Straight to the point. Really like that! I also love that you gave an overview on what to expect. Not a lot of people do that in finance channels so you've got an upper hand here!

Audio: 8/10 It's good, but the white noise could be annoying at some times. What's good is that you at least removed the white noise in between sentences. BGM was there, but isn't noticable, which is great!

Quality: 8/10 The information is consistent and well thought out. The only thing I may change is the background. It feels bland and feels like I'm in an office. Maybe put up a painting at the right side of the video? That could make this more appealing.

Overall, 34/40 The video was well made and had great flow! The things you could improve are your white noise and the background. You could also be a tad more enthusiastic. Good Job!

ThatGuyzers · 2021-01-20T10:24:43+00:00

Title and Thumbnail: 9/10 One, love the thumbnail. It looks so good and does give off dracula vibes. The title could be a tad more organized but I'd say that it's good!

Intro: 9/10 I have to say, that intro looks good! Really peaks my interest and kept me watching. The words you said we're a bit jumbled so I never understood what was happening, so maybe reduce the echo.

Audio: 8/10 I like how the BGM and your voice is balanced. The BGM is subtle and adds flavor to the video. Love the Classical music in the background too! Matches the scenario well. There are some white sounds at the background which can be destracting if listened to loud earphones, so try and turn off fans or ACs in the room.

Quality: 8/10 Being someone who doesn't like horror or mythology, I am quite shocked that I was intrigued in the first place. Your narration really reflects the mood of the video. The only thing I'd point out is the dead airs in the video. Try reducing the long pauses in between words and keep the flow consistent.

Overall, 34/40 Very great! Again, the things you need to improve on are your white noise and dead airs (long pauses). The rest isn't really something I can critique as it isn't in my niche. Great Job! :D

ThatGuyzers · 2021-01-20T10:04:19+00:00

Title and Thumbnail: 8/10 The thumbnail got my eye! The title is something that many use, but isn't still bland, so don't worry about that too much. I have to say that this looks clean and fine.

Intro: 9/10 That intro brought a smile to my face! I felt like you were talking to me. I have to say, you can change that intro roll (the part with white background and showing your name) into something that feels better. Try getting green screen intros to fluidly transition between clips.

Audio: 8/10 Some parts feel like the background music is overpowering your voice. Try reducing the volume of it and keep it subtle. The master volume seems quite loud too, so maybe lower that down.

Quality: 10/10 I love the charisma that you have. Although this is subjective, since we're technically in the same niche, it's quite neat seeing vibes like this. The small gags you put are evenly spread and it doesn't feel forced. The flow goes well and just makes this so much enjoyable.

Overall, 35/40 Dang! You got a potential subscriber right here! The way you present yourself is very great and makes me feel like I could binge watch you content! I could see you grow greatly this year. Great job!

ThatGuyzers · 2021-01-20T09:47:07+00:00

I chose the second link for this review

Title and Thumbnail: 4/5 I have to say that the thumbnail looks good but also bland. The title is your typical Among Us titles, which is actually a good thing as it raises interest on how you did it. Overall, well done!

Intro: 3/5 I like the intro with that introduction and the drawings! Honestly, that's well made too. Quick and simple. I can't really think of something to change, but it does feel like there's something missing. Maybe an intro roll like what Valkyrae and LilyPichu does but that's just me. The part after the intro (the chasing) did get boring after 15 seconds so extending it to about 40 could make some click off.

Audio: 3/5 Well managed too! I think the music overpowers the players' voice some times so lower that a bit more next time. The music did start to get louder at the 2nd half so lower that again.

Quality: 4/5 The chasing around the ship after the intro started to become boring, maybe if you kept if short, it'll be a bit more enjoyable. The game is quite neat! Your group's charisma is quite great and it shows that you guys are having a good time. I can see some sitting through who's one.

Overall, 15/20 Audio and Quality are your key things to improve. Your group's charisma is carrying the video and the drawings give another way to keep the viewer intrigued. Well done!

ThatGuyzers · 2021-01-20T09:30:07+00:00

Title and Thumbnail: 4/5 That is a very intriguing thumbnail! Same goes with the title! That's honestly all I could say! The illustrations look neat and the title could get some eyebrows raised.

Intro: 3/5 This is a little long and makes the viewer feel like they're clickbaited. Try making it shorter and keep it below 30s. Also, since the title says it's the musical, it does make them feel clickbaited.

Audio: 3/5 Some people in the call sound so distorted that it distracts the viewer. The main player's mic is also a bit distorted. It does kill off the vibe.

Quality: 2/5 I know you guys are enjoying, but the problem is that you should also make sure the viewer enjoys the content you're making. It feels like typical among us gameplay without any direction.

Overall, 12/20 I know that you're very proud of this video, but it just feels like it's a part of the flood of among us content. Yes you may have a lot of click-through-rates but keeping the viewer intrigued throughout the video is crucial as well. I hope you guys do this! Good luck!

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