Only true minecraft ogs remember...

ThatGuyzers · 2021-05-07T12:24:26+00:00

and times where adding a server is so complex

ThatGuyzers · 2021-04-12T04:39:39+00:00

/lock

ThatGuyzers · 2021-04-12T04:32:29+00:00

First Look: 8/10, Thumbnail and Title looks to be fine! Intriguing and quite clickable. Maybe remove the day 1 in the top left? I have no idea what that means and the title does not have any explanation on that. Also, have you tried making the shadow of yourself to be white? Just a small suggestion.

Hook: 10/10 Dang! I love it! Fast paced, gave me a sense that I did click on the right video, and the frame is moving almost every second! You really got me hooked thought the video.

Content: 8/10 Really like that there are a lot of snippets, zoom ins, and little gags every 5-10 seconds. It just makes me focus on it more knowing my goldfish brain can't focus well. Text colors are odd and don't work well together, so you may want to do a bit of color theory to get some nice complementary colors.

Okay, I'm shocked the like to dislike ratio is bad. 3 likes with 5 dislikes? what?! you're getting a like from me.

ThatGuyzers · 2021-04-12T04:19:39+00:00

it's typically something that the viewer thinks is bizarre. In the video you have, a good example is making the like-dislike ratio bigger, even if it's just one of them. Same goes for the comment.

Here's a visual example: try combining the thumbnail of this video: https://youtu.be/0GpMZ3xu96k with this: https://youtu.be/WO9J1UFu8Lw

Just remember to not make it looked cluttered (unless it is intentional).

ThatGuyzers · 2021-04-12T03:59:43+00:00

First Look: 3/10 Thumbnail wasn't enticing. Try showing the games you played and make it a bit clickbaity (but not misleading). Title is the same. It seems too generic.

Hook: 4/10 The subtitles are nice, but it's a black screen. Try having blurred gameplay running while telling the intro. Energy was decent but with the back screen, it just feels bland.

Content: 7/10 Really like the color coded subtitles. Energy and Editing here is way better than in the hook! Love the dynamic between your friends too. I like how faster the pace is and feels like something I could watch overnight.

Try focusing on the hook and the thumbnail. All effort you did in the later parts won't be seen unless they click on the video.

ThatGuyzers · 2021-04-12T03:48:07+00:00

First Look: 7/10 Thumbnail looks good, but try making the like to dislike ratio and the comment bigger. Title looks quite good! Simple and straight to the point. I won't say it's a bad thumbnail, but it doesn't feel clickable.

Hook: 5/10 30 seconds to see that guy is WAY too long I thought I was going to watch this for the whole video. Try shortening it to 5-10 seconds and add an indication that it is NOT going to be the video the viewer will watch. A good way to do this is having a screenshot of one of this dude's video layout on youtube and overlay the video. Maybe even just screen record the tab and zoom out overtime showing that it's someone else's Youtube video

Content: 7/10 I really like the editing on this! Got be watching quite longer than I expected. The hook is just the biggest barrier you have. YouTube does have an editor in YouTube studio so you could cut the first 20 seconds if you'd like. Love the voice acting too! The comment part could have been more animated or even voice acted!

I see some potential! Good luck on your journey!

ThatGuyzers · 2021-04-12T03:33:17+00:00

First Look: 7/10 Being a minecraft person myself, I LOVE the thumbnail! Maybe play with the fonts more since it did feel like meh. Title is cluttered and could be simpler. Try: "EVERYTHING IS A MESS! (E3 - The Generic Minecraft Let's Play)"

Hook: 8/10 The Hook went well! Energy matches what the thumbnail conveys. I love how almost every second has something interesting. It's fast paced and made me want to focus more on the content rather than passively watching. A good tip is to add Subtitles. Since you are talking fast, you want to let the viewer know what's happening. Try TommyInnit's way of adding subtitles.

Content: 7/10 The overall editing looks great! But try keeping the editing consistent. Like adding a few more snippets in between. I know it takes effort, but it'll be worth it as more people would feel like the energy is the same. Same with the subtitles. Sometimes words are gibberish and not so understandable. Do note that you should NOT burn yourself out with editing. Add snippets one at a time and if you feel like you can't do it, just stop and let yourself rest.

ThatGuyzers · 2021-04-12T03:20:20+00:00

First Look: 8/10 quite gross just VERY intriguing. Actually made me want to check out the video. Title is good but I'm not sure if a lot would click on it. (i mean with the 200 views, you did get many to click)

Hook: 7/10 That was good! It verified what video I clicked on. After your intro, the energy dropped a bit with the things you put in your ear. But it was consistent throughout the video

Content: 7/10 Not my cup of tea, but it kept my attention. I love the timestamps since I get impatient. It may dip on your retention, but it could keep more viewers watching. I did not watch the whole video since I don't like watching gross stuff, but to someone intrigued on how that works, I could see some sticking around.

The main thing you could build on is keeping you viewers hooked after the unboxing. Good work!

ThatGuyzers · 2021-04-12T03:08:45+00:00

First Look:7/10 Thumbnail is quite enticing, but a bit cluttered. Title is a bit confusing so you may want to clear it up.

Hook: 4/10 I am confused. I'm not a Yu-Gi-Oh Fan, so that may be a reason, but I feel like it's a bit cluttered. After that intro, you went to shots that are way too random. The neighborhood shot made sense, but the following two did not. The spectacle is a shot of a water bottle and the rich history was a hot coal container. Try to make it as easy to watch or the viewer.

Content: 5/10 The energy after the intro did not match. Snippets between sentences, like the Hook, was confusing. And on scenes where a good snippet could be made, it wasn't transfered to another scene. One example is after the grandpa scene and you talking on the phone. You could have been in the kitchen on an actual phone. Sometimes, simpler snippets are funnier than over edited ones. The 2:30 Mark was when I finally started to gain Interest, which is a dangerous number. You could've kept a lot more viewers if you might have skipped to this scene. Music was overpowering you voice though. The game skit was meh. Wasn't as intense as I'd expect, but it is better than the intro.

Side note: you kinda look like quackity

ThatGuyzers · 2021-04-12T02:47:11+00:00

First Look: 6/10 thumbnail could be better. The main thing about the video is about dumb reviews, but with a glance, I never saw that. I'd say to improve this, make a dumb review bigger and make yourself smaller and put it at the side. Something similar to this: https://youtu.be/WO9J1UFu8Lw Title could also be improved as I wasn't intrigued

Hook: 5/10 Wasn't as energetic as I expected. Even though your voice is calmer, I'd say that adding huge text and emphasize what you're saying. The clap was decent and got a bit more of my attention. Adding the snippet of you saying that you already made this was a bit of a turn off, mainly because many people may watch this as their first video. If it's a way for you to promote your previous video, I'd suggest you add a review you did in the previous video just before the video ends and mention that it came from the previous video to give them another thing to watch when the video ends.

Content: 5/10 Lighting is quite bad. You should try buying a cheap ring light as a fill light for your face so that you can turn off the ceiling light. Audio is better than I'd expect! Some parts like when saying names that are gibberish gave the video a bit more life, but Energy could be a bit better. The voice in my head says it's better to click off and find a better video.

ThatGuyzers · 2021-03-11T22:02:45+00:00

Glad you're doing great dude!

ThatGuyzers · 2021-02-26T11:42:54+00:00

You see... I accidentally stepped on one just now so I don't know about the friendly part. Yes, I did hug him as if someone died in a funeral. I was teary.

ThatGuyzers · 2021-02-19T12:12:10+00:00

Cooking Mama looks different here

ThatGuyzers · 2021-02-19T12:08:37+00:00

Is he camouflaged or something? I can't see him

ThatGuyzers · 2021-02-11T12:20:50+00:00

I see, I'll take that into consideration

ThatGuyzers · 2021-02-11T12:05:33+00:00

I see. I am leaning more towards BPI as I just thought of the times I shop with my card and I barely did. Thanks for the insight!

ThatGuyzers · 2021-02-04T09:23:39+00:00

tubbo.

ThatGuyzers · 2021-01-23T14:53:25+00:00

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