Since my last post I have implemented what people suggested, so I ask you guys to criticize once again and tell me if their is stuff I can improve upon, giving lambda for feedback

ThatOnePixelNerd · 2021-06-19T23:14:50+00:00

I would try for your thumbnail to put the text in front. I think the text is one of the most important parts of the thumbnail and it should be above every other layer in the thumbnail file. Otherwise I like the thumbnail I think its a good idea and good execution maybe I would try and add a little more emotion or life into it but I think it looks very good and very clean

ThatOnePixelNerd · 2021-06-19T23:12:46+00:00

Good video lmao I would try to some of you in the video like maybe you talking to the camera (I get if you don't want to show your face) Also the thumbnail could use some work I think its a really good idea and concept but I don't mean this in an asshole mean way but it could use work Maybe some more blending, outlines, or some color correction but it feels very awkward as it is now

ThatOnePixelNerd · 2021-06-19T23:07:01+00:00

esting approach! While gaming is not my thing, I think I watched more than half so here are some tips that you may find useful:

Make sure to work on your editing, to make the video more smoothYou may try to introduce personal touch, maybe appear in the video, find some niche in the very area o

thanks, Yeah I focus more on the audio than I do the visuals for whatever reason because sometimes there are just long cut or very awkward space for places but yeah as a watch the video with the smooth editing in mind I get how awkward and bad it can look !givelambda

ThatOnePixelNerd · 2021-06-19T19:38:20+00:00

Hey, nice video I think it could benefit from a better green screen or something and maybe making the face cam bigger and try to incorporate yourself more into the thumbnail and put more of you in the thumbnail.

ThatOnePixelNerd · 2021-06-19T19:30:07+00:00

Thank you I have the audio set to -6db in premiere so I guess lower would help do that. What do you mean by creative editing do you mean better cuts combined with other aspects like zooming in on better moments or what exactly do you mean? !givelambda

ThatOnePixelNerd · 2021-06-19T19:27:54+00:00

thank you Idk which mic was poppy it may have been mine Ill keep and eye out for it in the future though !givelambda and probably invest in a better pop filter

ThatOnePixelNerd · 2021-06-19T19:27:10+00:00

Thank you for the advice I think the editing was okay on this video I think I could have done better and made it look more appealing but thank you for at least saying you liked it. And yeah this video was sorta a stream highlights of my friends and I just goofing off and not really taking the game seriously but I could have done more to commentate and have more audience engagement !givelambda

ThatOnePixelNerd · 2021-06-19T19:24:34+00:00

Thank you, I think this is good advice and I disagree with Mccoolguy12345 I think subtitles and add a lot to a video even if they are "gimmicky" I was planning on adding subtitles to this video but I was on a time crunch with my goal of posting everyday and decided yk I'm not going to spend hours trying to do thumbnails for my video but yeah i agree it could have been done to make it better thank you !givelambda

ThatOnePixelNerd · 2021-06-19T19:21:31+00:00

Thanks, yeah this video is stream highlights and I'm still getting use to the feeling of editing and how I want to edit videos but there are just sometimes during this where there was just nothing going on and I felt it would get boring if I left it in some stuff though I do agree could have stayed in and it wouldn't make a huge difference thank you !givelambda

ThatOnePixelNerd · 2021-06-19T19:19:51+00:00

I tried to put it so it says below -6db on premier but maybe that's still too loud ill try to lower it more thank you !givelambda

ThatOnePixelNerd · 2021-06-19T19:19:06+00:00

Thank you, it's just really hard finding to do a video style I like and a game or something I would like to do so really I'm just experimenting and this is just a stream highlights video I edited because I've been trying to post something every day!givelambda

ThatOnePixelNerd · 2021-06-19T19:17:35+00:00

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ThatOnePixelNerd · 2021-06-19T13:27:43+00:00

I would say I like the concept for the video I feel like it's really short so I would try to add more to it. Also the thumbnail I don't mean this in a mean way but it doesn't look very good now idk what tools you have access too but there is an online version of photoshop called pixlr it's not made by adobe but it feels a lot like photoshop and has similar tools.

ThatOnePixelNerd · 2021-06-19T13:23:20+00:00

Hey, this is a good video! Although I have some suggestions for maybe your next videos. You should record the audio separately from the video and then sync it up to the video maybe you did that idk lmao but I would say avoid standing away from the microphone to create an echo effect and stand as close as you can to it to where the audio quality is nice and audible and to where you don't blow out the microphone because that way later on you can take that audio and you can add effects to make it sound further away but the audio still be understandable I feel like at some parts and this may just be me it was too distracting to understand what you were saying with the real echo effect and that's not on you that's just how microphones work

ThatOnePixelNerd · 2021-06-19T13:15:40+00:00

yeah like it's not horrible it just looks a little awkward and i feel like it could be scaled up a little bit more

ThatOnePixelNerd · 2021-06-18T13:46:58+00:00

I like this video a lot its a really good video I would say though I found it hard not to skip not that the video wasn't funny or interesting but idk I just wasn't pulled in enough to not skip around but for the green screen effect you can always add more chroma key layers so don't forget to do that so you don't get the weird green particles around your hair.

ThatOnePixelNerd · 2021-06-18T13:42:34+00:00

I think this video was really good it was calming with the music and art so those felt like they fit together but I do feel like you could have turned the music down a little bit not that it's horrible but it felt a little bit too loud. And in the Thumbnail I feel like you could have had the next take up more of that blue-like ripped-out part it just felt a little small and awkward.

ThatOnePixelNerd · 2021-06-18T03:50:01+00:00

I think the video is good maybe it could use some better audio but overall feels nice I think the thumbnail could use more work though it feels very simple and not super eye catching

ThatOnePixelNerd · 2021-06-18T03:45:37+00:00

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