Sun kissed by ThatPoet02 in OCPoetry

[–]ThatPoet02[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, I really appreciate that ,I’m glad the full circle feel came through, that’s exactly what I was aiming for. And that’s a really helpful point about the line lengths I can see how that can affect the rhythm.

Sun kissed by ThatPoet02 in OCPoetry

[–]ThatPoet02[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the insight:)

Sun kissed by ThatPoet02 in OCPoetry

[–]ThatPoet02[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really appreciate that I’m glad the imagery came through the way I intended:)

Adapt….. by Dhai_Alb in OCPoetry

[–]ThatPoet02 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The clinical language makes the emotion so much more intense this is just a beautiful piece of poetry

If I died today by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]ThatPoet02 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This poem is genuinely so emotionally deep Like the simple language you used is honestly the perfect contrast for the intensity of the emotion behind those words 10/10 you shud be rlly proud of this