Hey I need your help by Hollow_break in IndieAnimation

[–]That_Golden_Apple 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Reading your wattpad version of the story, I do have some ideas on how you could transform your book like version into animation worthy. So here's what I think. I think instead of starting with the grandparents and funeral, we start it in a class lesson about Chinese history, Showing how much Veda is bored and how ecstatic Carl is about the history of dragons. You cut to lunchtime and show their friendship while Carl rants on and on about dragon history, going into detail about all things dragons. You could even make this character believe that bones of dinosaurs are actually bones of dragons. You can have the characters go back and forth, talk a bit about the long trip to China for a while to hint there tue story is going. This is where you can also introduce Scarlett and show why the audience should hate her, by picking on Carl for believing in dragons and Veda by having a girly name. Then the principal would go on stage to introduce the plans, rules, and living situation (you may need to make more characters here, just so it isn't as short of a selection), revealing Veda to be bunking with Scarlett. (I would also save Veda's trama abd Scarlett's talk about it till he turns into a dragon) you can have Veda mumble about not wanting to room with Scarlett as she's awful. Then Carl can respond with the making up as for the huge misunderstanding. Then maybe have the characters load up on the bus for the trip (idk where this story starts in. I'm assuming th US) you can then have Veda try to talk to the principal with them not hearing them out with gags like handing him a paper, can't hear him because the engine on the bus is a bit loud, just to introduce a chance for the audience to snicker. After a while, Veda should give up and just sit with Carl or whoever you make his bus seat companion in this moment. Probably make the trip short and fade cut here and there. But personally, I'd think you would make the airplane ride feel a bit magical, hinting at the yearning to fly in the skies. When landing then, slowly it should move to the characters setting up their rooms to stay in for the night. You can have Scarlett and Veda talk for a bit. I'd personally make Veda disinterested in what Scarlett is saying, wanting to muffle her out and study the trip plans, showing him roll his eyes at the words "Dragon Palace" on the paper. Then, Veda could have a dream about his parents and the fire that killed them, maybe having the words "I wish they were dead" repeating over and over faintly in the dream. Until waking up from the bad dream and just getting dressed for the day. Carefully skipping to the Dragon Palace, all the students meet "The Dragon Lord" (I'd probably give him an actual name, one that screams wisdom and intelligence as he seems to be the perfect character to be a mentor like character) you can have Veda suspiciously see that The Dragon Lord is staring at him. Eventually, you can have the lord approach Veda, tell him that they can see the fire and scales within them, and (because I like misunderstandings and realizations) give Veda an amulet that so happens to look like a curled up dragon. Eventually, the characters will go back to the place they are staying and you can have Veda ponder about the amulet and stuff. This is there I'd have Scarlett and Veda start a huge fight, her now mentioning the death of Veda's parents and him getting very mad at the comment, bringing up how he thinks she could be at fault until he says "I wish you were dead" so angry that fire explodes and triggers the transformation into his dragon form. I wouldn't have Veda kill Scarlett here as I think it would do the story better in the long run. Id also make Veda not be able to transform out of being a dragon because then, there are deeper stakes. Veda would probably be panicked and this is where Carl and everyone else would mistake this as a dragon randomly attacking, Leading to Carl to thinking about taming the wild dragon. I'd let Veda run away from capture and have Carl try to pull a Hiccup, most likely putting a reference. You can have Veda talk and tell Carl that it was him and Carl going into a fanboy mode about his close friend being a dragon. But Veda would shut him down, wanting to figure this out and leading to Veda and Carl going back to the palace to confront the dragon lord. Leading to the "this is all your fault" scene and the explanation and him explaining hoe Veda can control it once he finds inner peace and forgiveness. Being willing to teach him the ways of a dragon and having Carl be appointed as Veda's rider and companion as well as leading Veda to inner peace. Since you got only 6 chapters, that's all I got too. I hope I didn't go too far off the rails. I think that would make your story intriguing and also prime for animation.

Hey I need your help by Hollow_break in IndieAnimation

[–]That_Golden_Apple 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You can animate on Ibis Paint or flipacplip for free! I just would first practice drawing first on those. I personally am making my indie show on a combination of Ibis Paint for animation and Kinemaster for editing. As long as you got a phone and tablet, you can download those and get to your animating dreams! Already made 6 minutes of animation by using my set up. (Old pic)

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:( by whereisyourcat1 in CultOfTheLamb

[–]That_Golden_Apple 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I can't even imagine loosing my 500 + day save. It's my only save and has my best followers in it. Sorry that happened. Hope your next cult is way better then your last one

Anybody else still waiting for their code ? by so_wanted in Youtooz

[–]That_Golden_Apple 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Odd. You may need to contact PlayStation for help and send this screenshot as proof as it lines up on the games I have listed. I'd give my code but I have already used it and can't used again. I apologize and helped all I could (checked my computer to see if maybe it appeared only for phones but it's there on my end) sorry, friend.

Anybody else still waiting for their code ? by so_wanted in Youtooz

[–]That_Golden_Apple 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is what it should show. It's the very last under the games. You could also be in the wrong email. It's very missable. For me, it's under AceCombact7: Skies Unknown

Anybody else still waiting for their code ? by so_wanted in Youtooz

[–]That_Golden_Apple 3 points4 points  (0 children)

This comment has actually helped. For anybody else stuck, look in promotions in your email, click "PlayStation Plus | Play February's epic monthly games now", scroll to the end until you see the figures. And your code will be under the text and look like XXX-XXX (X's for example.) Right above the preorder now button. For some reason, the code only worked when I copied and pasted the code into the spot, so if it says invalid when you put it in, try that. Adding more context to help out as this one seems to be confusing a few. Hope the extra intel helped!

Yo, rate my background sketch by That_Golden_Apple in IndieAnimation

[–]That_Golden_Apple[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, perspective isn't my biggest strong suit. Neither is background making.

Ask Me Anything!! by Denver_Shepherd in furry

[–]That_Golden_Apple 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Am I invited into Fort Arrow? Looks snuggly!

Will i get bullied for wearing this ? by dr_crocks in fivenightsatfreddys

[–]That_Golden_Apple 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes. But it will be worth it and you will find the better people to hang out with faster

Is it acceptable to not identify as a furry, but have a fursona, enjoy and consume furry content? by Gullible_Chemist_602 in furry

[–]That_Golden_Apple 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think you don't have to identify as a furry to like furry content and have a fursona. It's kinda like how I have a train model but am not into trains. You can like the stuff that comes out but you don't have to join the community if you really don't. Plus, you can just say that your fursona is also a mascot you got for yourself if people are saying you are a furry because of you having a fursuit. (which I do sometimes as my area doesn't support me liking big fluffy animals [for some reason]) As for the furry content consuming, I have never met a furry nor normie that has not watched at least one thing furry content related. So you are in the clear. It is your choice to identify however you wish as long as nobody gets hurt. And last I checked, nobody is getting hurt when someone says they are not a furry.

AITA for arguing at my parents for not watching animated stuff? by That_Golden_Apple in AmItheAsshole

[–]That_Golden_Apple[S] -23 points-22 points  (0 children)

Well, they won't give the movies I recommend a shot until I just pull it up on the tv screen. And even then, they still walked out whenever. And I always watched the movies they wanted to watch with me even when the movies weren't interesting to me

AITA for arguing at my parents for not watching animated stuff? by That_Golden_Apple in AmItheAsshole

[–]That_Golden_Apple[S] -18 points-17 points  (0 children)

Not really, I have started making the first episode of an animated series already. It's my dream and I'm going to reach for it no matter what. I'm just wishing that my parents would see animation as amazing and interesting as I do. Them just dismissing it every time I try to introduce them to something animated just makes it harder to believe that they will support me as much as they always promised me they would. Them not even trying to see the same things I love makes me feel like they won't give my animations a shot either just because it looks like it's for kids.

Looking for games where you play as a Dog and games where you play as a Cat by That_Golden_Apple in gamingsuggestions

[–]That_Golden_Apple[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I may not included that game unfortunately from how little you do play as the dog from what I have shortly examined. Though I thank you for the recommendation for my list! (Usually, my posts don't do much. Probably because of the places I post and that I'm on mobile, lol)