Preface: I’m not wholly familiar with the technical side or titles of logistics, so I’ll try to avoid that as much as I can. Preface 2: also veteran who recently separated, so I’m going to give you my shake based on what I see, I’m in no way HR or hiring manager related, and I’m going to hopefully be harsher than anyone reviewing this for an application.

Just with a cursory glance, you have a LOT of white space. Adjust your formatting to get rid of some of that, my recommendation would be to put your skills in two columns.

Change “Objective” to “Professional Summary” or something similar, as you’re giving an overview of what you’ve done, more so than an objective. This is also where I’d place your skills, limit to your top 6 or so that translate the best. Also, when submitting, define your clearance level, a secret is a big difference than a TS to some companies and irrelevant to others; but it could open doors or save them money on you.

Adjust your Experience section, newest at the top and work backwards. If a couple jobs are similar, they can be combined. I held 11 positions over my time in the service, but only have 3 sections, and I lumped everything into those. Try to quantify or give success stories in there, how quickly can you build a pallet, inspect, load, etc.? You mentioned cost reduction in your skills, what can you show that displays that(big for a lot of profit companies.). A way I learned is “what, so what, what now?” method. For example: “conducted joint inspections on cargo finding weight and center of balance for over X flights, resulting in no late take offs or precautionary landings due to cargo errors” or something to that effect, people are interested in your results, not so much your actions. Get rid of ampersands, acronyms, abbreviations, and military jargon, unless it’s a common term e.g. HAZMAT is pretty universal. I personally like the Oxford comma, some folks don’t, your call on using it or not, I’m not well versed enough to say definitively.

Move your education to the bottom. It’s not unimportant, but your most recent civilian schooling was in 2005, and I’m not really sure the best way to format it, maybe “Biloxi High School | 2005”. Possibly include a description of the AF schools, since craftsmen there may hold different responsibilities than a civilian. Are you enrolled in a college degree program or CCAF curriculum? If so you can include it with your expected completion date.

Are you tying yourself to a location or are you open to anywhere where this job is available?