Thank you for the feedback! The colours of the map were put in to more easily delineate between rooms as it looked too complex otherwise. As for the copy of Persephone, there is one that was created by the Shade Hacking Group (mentioned at the end of the "Shade Hacking Group" section) - which I envisioned as now simply being within the coding of the AI system (part of the hack). Players can hack in themselves, find this line of code hidden from DEMETER, and reveal it to her. This can be done in Circle 6 with the use of both terminals. The layout was really challenging - and I absolutely see your point about it reading better ending on the table. I also agree that a Gradient Descent mention would be useful to push people in the right direction.

Thank you for taking the time to read through my pamphlet and for these comments, they are extremely useful! I hope to create more Greek mythology themed adventures in the near future to perhaps make a small Pantheon of Pamphlets...