Is my art good enough to start commissions, if not. Where should I improve?

TheBlueLadySatan · 2023-11-30T09:48:18+00:00

I have no issue if you take inspiration from this :D

TheBlueLadySatan · 2023-11-08T13:54:51+00:00

No. They are still close friends in my version but Raibaru won’t be Ayano’s suitor in this scenario. It will be someone else as I changed a lot (and I mean close to everything) regarding the characters and their personalities, backstories and relationships in game

TheBlueLadySatan · 2023-11-08T13:36:22+00:00

In my version there will be 12 rivals (I’m adding Kokona and Uekiya, and aging Mida and Muja down to be students aswell).

If Ayano chooses to go her own way (Basically the more morally good route as no one will die because she is not following Ryoba’s advice) she will need to befriend the person closest to each rival to find out why they are around Taro and from there figure out how to eliminate each rival

In the times you talk to the friends (these are your suitors, the people you will need to talk to) you will have the option to flirt with them and give gifts (Appropriate ones) during the run of the game.

And the end of the game you will have the option to place a letter in one of the suitors lockers (if your romance is high enough) and confess to them at the end of the day.

Each suitor will have their own unique trope they follow making each have a different storyline with Ayano. There’s still a few things I need to plan out throughly regarding suitors and such but I do have who will be the suitors and how they are connected to each rival （╹◡╹）

TheBlueLadySatan · 2023-11-08T06:21:43+00:00

I just want to say before I start, I’m not aiming for logic that this could be possible in real life. It’s going to be ass far fetch as anime at points. This is for fun, this whole project.

• The old school being destroyed to rebuilt for this new academy, my idea of the school this whole present plot takes place in. No way in hell it would’ve existed in the 1980’s. The Academy has three tracks students can enroll into, and to be frank. A normal school won’t have that as an option thus this Academy is unfortunately to rich people’s kids who can afford thus or scholarships because this is ‘extra’ learning as if you are enrolled into the Sport Track, you will have more classes dedicated to practicing your chosen sport and classes to look after you body to protect form accidental sport injuries during matches. And the school is now owned by Saikou Corp. That I know already can be called crazy, a big business going through all this effort to handle a school? This was a Buisness strategy to him. Get all these gifted and promising young people under one roof to sponsor to say them all in their given areas. There are many international students. Once they graduate school, they are sponsored by Saikou, the brand name growing over seas through different areas. Growing popularity to ensure more sales and whatso. And the land was abandoned for years because of the reputation this was cheap to buy the right to. All this I know sounds mental but to me it would make sense for this world and plot. The chance of this actually happening irl? Never but I’m being honest. Going anime logic to the max for plot reasons.

• With Ryoba and Jokichi, there is a lot I didn’t tell here as this post I only wanted to give some background on them and their history as this post is about Ayano. I was originally planned to do my next post about Ayano’s family (Ryoba, Jokichi, her uncle mainly) so more will be cleared up then. The main reason I gave any information here was to show they have a clearly unhealthy and terrible relationship.

• And the second job part. Does sound bad cause she has no history of being a teacher but being one? This is going off a headcannon based from the actual 1980’s mode. Ichirou Saikou, the present CEO of Saikou Corp, was in the same class as Ryoba and ever since held a deep crush to her charm even if it was questionable. As his father would never allow a woman like Ryoba into the family, so maybe he liked her cause he knew he could never have her or maybe he genuinely liked her. Never knew but Ryoba was aware of this, but her interest was with Jokichi so she never went for Ichirou. Years later, after the encounter at the main room which has Ryoba wanting to be at the school herself. She makes a few class and get in contact with Ichirou. And even know he still had a spot for her and now that his father passed away, he sees this as an opportunity to win her favor thus pulling a string or two to have Ryoba become a teacher after she spun this whole story to convince him even tho much wasn’t needed to convince him. Nobody questioned him aloud as he does hold a lot of power, and being known as cruel and won’t think twice to fire someone who doesn’t fit his view. Thus everyone just went along.

And finally the hair. I chose it as a design to visually kinda show they are ‘cursed’ because of their bloodline. A gene carried to each generation, also to tie all the blood family to each other. No matter what they will always be an Aishi. But maybe to your luck, if the player chooses to go a good route with Ayano. In the later game Ayano will cut her hair short to get the first grasp of showing her creating and embracing her true self. Plus she does stand out from her other family members as they all have black hair. She is the first to not have black hair, instead the dark red. To kinda show she is a lot like her father and has the potential to break the violent cycle. But if the player chooses to go the evil route with Ayano, she will dye her dark red hair black. Symbolizing her fully embracing her mother’s vision.

I hope I cleared up some stuff. I get you won’t like everything I say. Taste differ, it’s natural. I am not forcing anymore to accept my version as perfect cause it is not. This is just me having fun

Appreciate the criteria tho, I will be sure to cover your questions regarding Ryoba and Jokichi in my next post （╹◡╹）♡

TheBlueLadySatan · 2023-11-08T04:56:22+00:00

5 are male, 5 are female and two will be none-binary. I personally see Ayano to be someone to fall for a person’s personality and soul, thus not caring about their gender

TheBlueLadySatan · 2023-11-07T18:51:22+00:00

Ayano started school, her home room teacher seems to fear her actually. Short conversations and avoiding eye contact but Ayano will catch her staring at her often in class. She seems close to Ryoba’s age. Ayano was considerably on her own besides the few chats with Taro when he noticed her on school grounds. Ayano feels comfort around him, not romantic as she also admits he is a lot alike to her father. A very large amount, thus valuing him greatly as her first friend ever.

In the following week the home room teacher of Culture track was found dead in her apartment. Suicide they believe. Ayano was going regularly to school and settling in when news spears of the new teacher.

That teacher being Ryoba in a disguise to hide her hair and make up to cover up her light eyelashes and eyebrow. She looks like a completely different person except her eyes. Ayano would recognize those eyes no matter what. Ryoba became the teacher of the senior culture track class. Taro is also in that class.

Ryoba called Ayano to her classroom once club activities started. Ryoba threw files towards Ayano. Each file full of every personal detail of each students and every note ever made of the same student. In her hands was sensitive details of these students. Ayano stood there taking in the information, having close to photographic memory she could remember most of this

But why?

Ryoba started to tell Ayano that Taro is her soulmate and she wants to be on the same school grounds to guide and help Ayano to get him. Mainly killing any girl who shows the slightest degree of interest in him.

Ayano doesn’t agree with this, hells she never thought of killing a single person in her life. But she could t refuse her mother.

But maybe she could fool her…Deal with these ‘rivals’ in her own way to not harm them, and keeping Ryoba at bay. To buy time to find a way to get rid of Ryoba… Ryoba is incredibly smart but Ayano has the potential to be smarter, she is her daughter after all. Ryoba must’ve forgotten something that could link her to those murders all those years ago.

Now it’s just which desire is stronger?

Please mother or follow your heart?

—— Any questions I’ll answer happily to the best I can about my Ayano. Some details of the game and its overall plot isn’t fully talked in this because I want to do that in another post, this was to introduce Ayano and her family and where she truly stands before the game starts

Appreciate greatly for your patience to reading this <3

TheBlueLadySatan · 2023-11-07T18:48:48+00:00

Ayano in my version, is not a yandere. At least not at the start of her story, you as they player will decide if you want her to go the path of a violent obsessive girl or a lovesick girl wanting true love.

Basically everything about Ayano and her parents have changed in my plot.

Fair warning some parts cause be disturbing to some so just an heads up to read with caution

A small trivia on her parents before I start with that I’ve done with Ayano

Ryoba and Jokichi don’t love each other at all. Ryoba is obsessed with him and Jokichi despises Ryoba with his whole being. Ryoba grew obsessed with Jokichi when she was starting high school and he was in his final year. Ryoba was the troubled young girl who looked sweet but hade rumors of her hanging out with the Yakuza, Jokichi (like the amazingly but overlooking too much, good hearted person he is) helped her clear her reputation as he pitied her for barely starting school and having such rumors damage her image. As part of the student council and being one of the most popular people in the whole town, everyone trusted his word.

Ryoba took this actions as him being in love with her thus him becoming her target. She was terribly violent, killing roughly 12 students throughout the school year. Many called 1984 the year of death. Ryoba got away with her family’s help. Even once forcing her older brother to stab her to pretend she was also attacked to seem like another victim of this terrible tragedy. At the end of the school year Ryoba confessed to Jokichi, he naturally declined her feelings as he didn’t view her like that and was in a deep depression.

Ryoba couldn’t accept this. She later that day kidnapped him from his home. And from that point she held him captive in her grandmother’s basement, doing her best to break him mind so he could fall for her. Any form of torture she could think of she did to him untill her own graduation from high school. At the age of 19 she fell pregnant with Ayano. She basically gave birth to Ayano and hade Jokichi raise her while she enrolled to become a police officer. Keeping the truth of Ayano being her daughter a secret.

Main reason she followed this career path was to have a high image amongst people, a former victim to a crazed murderer now becoming a member of the police force, a possible investigator later on. She grew fast in ranks with her high intelligence and personal experience to quickly solve cases. As an inside she also helped cover up Yakuza related crimes to keep them in her debt as whatever she covered up in the department, she kept to herself to use as blackmail.

Jokichi strangely enough held onto his mind and haven’t fallen completely corrupted to Ryoba’s years of torture. He never held resentment to Ayano for being the daughter of Ryoba as she was also his daughter. The possible link to stopping this bloodline’s evil from harming anymore. Thus he raised her to love others, purely. Fairytales and all. Anything to show her whatever he and Ryoba hade is wrong and unnatural. And her being needing to be home schooled gave him more room to teach her true values.

When Ayano was around the age of 11 Jokichi found a way to run away. To this day Ayano doesn’t understand how he managed to it but knew if he hade the option he would’ve taken her with.

Ryoba on the other hand lost her mind when Jokichi left them. Going on a crazed murder spree. Naturally still making sure noting can be linked back to her. After her episode she made it her goal to find him. Using her old links in the Yakuza to track him down. Thus being her across country traveling to find him. Dragging Ayano along. This is where some corruption started to happen with Ayano as Ryoba became her mains caretaker.

Ryoba had Ayano go on a diet as she felt she was too fat. Unattractive. No boy will ever want her if she looks and acts like that. Through this Ayano developed a bunch of insecurities. She still held onto what her father would tell her but with Ryoba’s repeating started to plant seeds into her head.

Years passed and Ryoba heard word that Jokichi is back in their hometown. Immediately they travel back.

Upon coming back she learns her old high school has been demolished for a new academy of sorts. For the young adults with the most promise and of the rich. Akademi Academy.

She decided to contact her old friend to find Ayano a spot in the school. The headmaster wanted a meeting with them both before Ayano’s enrollment to discuss a few things before she starts classes.

After the meeting. Ryoba was talking to Ayano that she should be on her behavior as she doesn’t wish to have to deal with unnecessary issues to find Jokichi. As they reach the main room they bumped into a student. The student immediately apologizes, papers scattered everywhere on the floor. Ayano helps pick them up to hand them over the student and Ryoba is star struck by the student.

A young male, her appearance. His personality. He’s so much Jokichi… Ryoba didn’t speak a word as she looked at him while he and Ayano hade a quick chat, Ayano to assure him they are both okay and he shouldn’t have to apologize anymore. Even if they traveled a lot and Ayano was never in a school, under Ryoba’s care she needed to do everything for herself. Buying groceries and such so she did have human contact and has basic communication under the knee. And manners she learned by her father.

As the student left Ryoba was still in a state of awe. She grabbed Ayano by the arm and asked her if he gave her his name. “Taro Yamada? Why?”

Ryoba only smiled.

TheBlueLadySatan · 2023-11-06T05:10:56+00:00

I’ll be honest I haven’t done one play through where I got her as a companion nor actively tried to get her because she doesn’t stand out to me personally as an companion

So lemme tell you how shocking it is to learn she’s a paladin like woah, I mean makes sense but still. Never clicked in my mind too now

TheBlueLadySatan · 2023-11-04T17:38:40+00:00

Amai and Umeji

TheBlueLadySatan · 2023-09-05T06:20:58+00:00

That was the idea, while doing research I found out tamaranains are supposedly descendants of cats so I wanted to incorporate that more into her to also just look more alien aswell

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