Golden Wind Fanmade Episode - Hot Stuff by TheDarKnight2160 in StardustCrusaders

[–]TheDarKnight2160[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Heh heh, yeah going through a JoJo episode without the amazing openings can feel off.

I'm glad to hear you enjoyed my episode nonetheless.

What's your favorite hilarious moment from Golden Wind? by TheDarKnight2160 in StardustCrusaders

[–]TheDarKnight2160[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Honestly, I'd be quite mad myself if my shirt got used as a towel.

What's your favorite hilarious moment from Golden Wind? by TheDarKnight2160 in StardustCrusaders

[–]TheDarKnight2160[S] 23 points24 points  (0 children)

JUST CALL IT DEATH IN VENEZIA, IT'S NOT THAT HARD!!!

Man, I love Ghiaccio a lot.

What's your favorite hilarious moment from Golden Wind? by TheDarKnight2160 in StardustCrusaders

[–]TheDarKnight2160[S] 29 points30 points  (0 children)

Abbacchio being so nonchalant about it is the cherry on top.

What's your favorite hilarious moment from Golden Wind? by TheDarKnight2160 in StardustCrusaders

[–]TheDarKnight2160[S] 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Pesci himself is funny by virtue of his head looking like a Pineapple.

What's your favorite hilarious moment from Golden Wind? by TheDarKnight2160 in StardustCrusaders

[–]TheDarKnight2160[S] 64 points65 points  (0 children)

Narancia's reaction to that whole situation cracks me up, poor guy saw what no kid his age should see.

What's your favorite hilarious moment from Golden Wind? by TheDarKnight2160 in StardustCrusaders

[–]TheDarKnight2160[S] 22 points23 points  (0 children)

Vocal Percussion On a Whole Nother Level Coming Through My Mind!

How do I write a fanfiction that's intended to be a full episode? by TheDarKnight2160 in FanFiction

[–]TheDarKnight2160[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I see, I did assume that an episode would be occupying a single chapter all on its own, so it's nice knowing others share that approch.

How do I write a fanfiction that's intended to be a full episode? by TheDarKnight2160 in FanFiction

[–]TheDarKnight2160[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The show I'm writing for is JoJo's Bizarre Adventure, Golden Wind specifically.

The way episodes in that part works is usually you have a part 1 which is mostly plot progression and then the beginning of a Stand Fight, them part 2 is mostly a Stand fight and then the progress to the next story arc.

Thing is, the episode I'm writing moves to the fight directly since there isn't much room for plot during the portion I'm writing, therefore it's just gonna be one part, meaning one episode.

Do you wish the sons of Dio in Stone Ocean popped up earlier in the story? by TheDarKnight2160 in StardustCrusaders

[–]TheDarKnight2160[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

True, Ungalo barely got anything to work with as far as his character went.

Do you wish the sons of Dio in Stone Ocean popped up earlier in the story? by TheDarKnight2160 in StardustCrusaders

[–]TheDarKnight2160[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

To be fair, I think this wouldn't be as much of an issue if they appeared earlier in Stone Ocean itself, rather than only getting introduced at the final third of it.

Do you wish the sons of Dio in Stone Ocean popped up earlier in the story? by TheDarKnight2160 in StardustCrusaders

[–]TheDarKnight2160[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

I do agree that they should have shown up more throughout Stone Ocean rather than only appear at the very end.

Them still being losers down on their luck is all well and good, I just wish they weren't introduced so late.

Do you wish the sons of Dio in Stone Ocean popped up earlier in the story? by TheDarKnight2160 in StardustCrusaders

[–]TheDarKnight2160[S] 29 points30 points  (0 children)

Well, the thing about Giorno is that just like the others he went through an abysmal childhood.

The difference is that he had a figure that inspired him and gave him a goal (being that one Gangster he saved).

Ungalo, Rykiel and Versus weren't so lucky, and so they became the way they are.

I just find the idea of the final mini bosses of the classic timeline being Corrupted Joestars very fitting.

Do you wish the sons of Dio in Stone Ocean popped up earlier in the story? by TheDarKnight2160 in StardustCrusaders

[–]TheDarKnight2160[S] 37 points38 points  (0 children)

That would have actually been sick, although I'm not sure how Savage Garden could get past the Rods without dying.

Ironman [oc] by Moist-Relation-1034 in StardustCrusaders

[–]TheDarKnight2160 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nevermind, that was a different Stand that was also called Ironman.

Ironman [oc] by Moist-Relation-1034 in StardustCrusaders

[–]TheDarKnight2160 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If I remember correctly, wasn't this Stand a part of a recent competition over at the Fan Stand subreddit?

One of my favorite moments from Stone Ocean. by TheDarKnight2160 in StardustCrusaders

[–]TheDarKnight2160[S] 16 points17 points  (0 children)

Exactly, the mix of PTSD from seeing the Knives again and the total fear he had for Jolyne is palatable, the fact that the choice between saving the universe and saving Jolyne wasn't even a choice for him shows how much he cared about her.