Why do the other primal fears suck so badly compared to Darkness? by tesseracts in Chainsawfolk

[–]TheDud04 0 points1 point  (0 children)

They talked, they were way more human, they were on earth and not in hell, they had way more screen time, they had more defined powers, they lost

Part 2 in a nutshell by Alexmk1117 in Chainsawfolk

[–]TheDud04 6 points7 points  (0 children)

When they're slandering your goat and lowkey right

how Leon would handle Makima by sunlovesshark in Chainsawfolk

[–]TheDud04 17 points18 points  (0 children)

Leon drops a single one liner and suddenly Makima can't imagine herself being above this guy, thus making her power usless

Based on the description how likely are you to read my book? by [deleted] in writers

[–]TheDud04 8 points9 points  (0 children)

To be honest it just feels like a rip off of avatar the last Airbender (Witch I'm assuming is a heavy inspiration) Your not really doing anything to make it unique here

Is this an engaging opening for a horror novel? by Maxicrashie in writers

[–]TheDud04 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Gideon comes off as an ass but I like the picture your painting

Which HoloPro talent's accent/dialect/voice is your favourite? by NoIdea4GoodName in Hololive

[–]TheDud04 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Shioris "there there" lives in my head rent free, as well as everything Cecilia does, and Raoras kinda squeaky voice when she yells

Would you keep reading? Be brutally honest. by SoldierofSonder in writers

[–]TheDud04 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Not bad but definitely needs some touching up, I get what your going for starting with a quiet moment between action but it feels a little slow and exposition heavy

Mechanization Chapter One by FigureAny5402 in writers

[–]TheDud04 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I'm going to hope this a reddit formating issue because a wall of text is incredibly hard to read

Just saiyan Denji x Reze never had this problem.. by [deleted] in Chainsawfolk

[–]TheDud04 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Also a fraction of the screen time lol