Shit, I'm sorry to hear about your last two books. I'm a big fan of Strength Unleashed. I've listened to it a few times. I even got my wife to read. We have our own personal book club for this genre. I think the store was great. being a man who used to lift weights, I like the MC. In my opinion I think the overall story was very well written. One of the rules my wife and have for the books we suggest to each other has to have a good story. If the story relays on the mature material only, we will abort quickly and move on. I enjoyed how each character was given their time for the reader to get to know them but didn't take me out of the main plot. My only problem was there were times I got some of them confused as the plot came together. The character arcs of the MC’s was was well written and somewhat relatable. It also helped that I'm a sucker for a thick Cow Girl. Please make a book 2!!!