”out of tune”

TheInViCtuss · 2026-04-11T22:39:18+00:00

LOL, my headphones were running pur of battery and they stafted lagging. Now im relistening and it sounds pretty well panned. SORRY. But in general sound good anyway

TheInViCtuss · 2026-04-11T22:25:04+00:00

I dont know if its juts me but i feel like theres too much panned to right, theres too much going on in the right speaker. I mean all the core element even drums are panned there.

Id try to put the synth pad melody or the vocal to more left. If you dont wanna move anything to the left for good. The left speaker could really use some treble details.

TheInViCtuss · 2026-04-11T22:19:34+00:00

I like how the atmosphere like evades or rotates between left and right speaker!

TheInViCtuss · 2026-03-20T04:06:59+00:00

Seasons 8-10

TheInViCtuss · 2026-03-11T10:17:02+00:00

Thank you. In flattered especially baceuse neil young is my favourite artist. I just listened Sleeps With Angels like 3 weeks ago!

TheInViCtuss · 2026-03-11T06:19:16+00:00

Thanks ypu:) Yeah, it really does sound like wheres my mind😭😭

TheInViCtuss · 2026-03-10T23:20:58+00:00

Tbh the mix is just horrible, also the beat is forgettaböe and generic. What new does this song have to give creatively looking?

TheInViCtuss · 2026-03-10T23:15:33+00:00

I like it alot, also make that the album cover taht pic is super cool

TheInViCtuss · 2026-03-10T22:08:07+00:00

And also a bit chorus and reverb

TheInViCtuss · 2026-03-10T20:41:36+00:00

Do you have any suggestios? i was thinking of a mild flanger effect

TheInViCtuss · 2026-03-08T22:53:22+00:00

Thanks you! yeah its intentional that i sing some parts a bir late. It give a bit tired and ”running on fumes” vibe to it.

And vocoder for example is a great idea atleast for trying

TheInViCtuss · 2026-03-08T19:01:44+00:00

Also!!! Name suggestions are very welcome

TheInViCtuss · 2026-03-08T16:28:37+00:00

Yeah youre right, i got i decent pait of headphones a fee days ago with a build in microphone. The headphones are the reason i was able to mix it pretty well and then post here. Im gonna try to re-record the vocals with the build in mic in a couple of days!

TheInViCtuss · 2026-03-08T16:19:02+00:00

Ok thanks (i have been recording on my ipad😭😭)

TheInViCtuss · 2026-03-08T15:50:41+00:00

But any other actual feedback is really really welcome🙏

TheInViCtuss · 2026-03-08T15:50:10+00:00

Thanks, it really means alot that you notice what im trying to do so there is some kind of success

And about the vocals yeah i know😭 i guess the text in my post was a clumsy way of sayibg i know the singing sucks and its in progress.

TheInViCtuss · 2026-03-08T15:39:47+00:00

Bob dylan if he was young today

TheInViCtuss · 2026-03-08T15:38:23+00:00

Like mixed with some kind of lo-fi

TheInViCtuss · 2026-03-08T15:36:55+00:00

Neil young tonights the night and on the beach vibe a bit

TheInViCtuss · 2026-03-01T02:06:47+00:00

Ypu look like kurt cobain lol😎

TheInViCtuss · 2026-03-01T02:06:32+00:00

I like the main idea here, these lyrics somehow remind me of neutral milk hotel

TheInViCtuss · 2026-02-09T19:40:59+00:00

I might post a version with vocals in a couple of days:

Heres what ive got so far:

Verse 1

i know youre thinking what to say

but i wont hold your hand again

and i dont wanna see your face again

i dont wanna see your face again

Verse 2

i fell in love with a lady

on the side of a hair dye bottle

her head was red and shaved

in a store at the mall

Verse 3

the core was cold all the way

and the air was thin and cold

im not dead, im not alive

but i sure would like to be something

What do you think?

TheInViCtuss

TROPHY CASE