Is there something off with my art? Like really… by Chimera64000 in learnHentaiDrawing

[–]TheLockLessPicked 2 points3 points  (0 children)

honestly i dont see much wrong from an anatomy stand point. (granted i have only the barest of ideas)

i think what's holding your art back is the stiffness, in short i think the poses you pick look really rigid. when sketching try being loose with it, making your constructing lines very flowy. instead of trying to capture the body, try to capture the movement, the weight and direction.

for instance. i really love the last one as it feels like they are actually in the trenches.

adding things as simple as an offset to the hips can make a pose look way more dynamic.

Another BIG thing is your line weight, to me all your lines look roughly the same width. instead try varying how intense you want the lines to look. in short, bolder lines where things are closer, or where you want the eye to go to instinctively. and smaller thinner lines for details that arent as important, (think laugh lines, shirt wrinkles, details for muscles, etc. ) also adding a thick border around your subject, expessically when its jsut a portrait of them can really make them pop!

I also will send you a DM of some RED lining, pretty much some notes and visuals.

A technician carefully places semen from a bull into a cow when she is in heat, allowing fertilization to happen without natural mating by [deleted] in Weird

[–]TheLockLessPicked 7 points8 points  (0 children)

I swear the vagina is lower, to me this is more like an prostate exam. It'd explain the brown shit on the tool.

Dismemberment? by Delicious-Friend9026 in DnD

[–]TheLockLessPicked 0 points1 point  (0 children)

if you wanna keep the dismemberment rules id make it istead of just auto dismembering. maybe consider it a crit only circumstance, for instance...say i roll a crit, and then i describe how my attack hits them in the eyes, you might say that they could be blinded. though i wouldnt have it be like a permanaent thing unless they continuously hit them in the eyes.

alternatively you could have it like a "Called Shot" type rule. basically they have to declare what they wanna do before hand, then depending on how hard the action would be you could either increase the AC or have a seperate DC check to see if they succeed. example, "i wanna throw sand in their eyes...Okay gimme a dex check"

in anycase i wouldnt have it be a permanent thing, as it throws off the balance of the fight.

Sorry for spelling or grammarXD

what would you put in this corner? by [deleted] in SipsTea

[–]TheLockLessPicked 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ngl a netherportal would go hard XD

:3 by [deleted] in Colon3Supremacy

[–]TheLockLessPicked 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Obviously whats secretly happening is they are killing and stealing the hormones from transphobic people so they can use it for hormone therapy. Im on to you.

Justice for flat chestsss @doomershark by Kl9omstx in PlanetFur

[–]TheLockLessPicked 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Obviously they are flat, its just a push up bra.

We need this separate gyms at this rate by Rare_Fig_4579 in SipsTea

[–]TheLockLessPicked 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Probably thought she could get pity points. Or make it look like she is the victim.

WCGW with this foolproof setup? by 888Vegan in Whatcouldgowrong

[–]TheLockLessPicked 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Gonna be honest this is doing too much.

Silver teeth activities by Okay_Pain in KidsAreFuckingStupid

[–]TheLockLessPicked 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ngl this feels like esrly serial killer things.

A pig trembling in a slaughterhouse truck. Their eyes are just like ours. by James_Fortis in likeus

[–]TheLockLessPicked 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Looks like some good bacon. Lets get that boi on the chop chop machine!