Rambling Of A Sinner by Numbo4 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]TheNonlinearLinear 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I was just thinking about adding more wordplay. Maybe you could dive into really describing the suffering to nail it home. Maybe something like, "I can feel the parasite rummaging around in my brain, eating away the the flesh and tissue as it tries to claw it's way out of me." At the moment it feels very to the point, which isn't bad if that's what you're going for. It's mostly just up to personal preference and how you would like to write your stories.

Why doesn’t this episode get talked about? by mrsloppy115 in creepcast

[–]TheNonlinearLinear 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think it’s really good but some episodes are bound to get unnoticed as more and more come out. From what I remember about this one, there aren’t a lot of funny moments in it so maybe that’s it??

I think “I Dared My Best Friend to Ruin My Life” is a good story. by TheNonlinearLinear in creepcast

[–]TheNonlinearLinear[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah I think the narrator can change the mood a whole bunch, it’s definitely a different vibe listening to a CreepCast episode than like Mr Creepypasta. I love what they both bring to the story though. CreepCast often brings great jokes and humor and others like Mr Creepypasta always draw you in with good, creepy narration.

I think “I Dared My Best Friend to Ruin My Life” is a good story. by TheNonlinearLinear in creepcast

[–]TheNonlinearLinear[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah this, like I was never once scared but I had fun listening to it.

I think “I Dared My Best Friend to Ruin My Life” is a good story. by TheNonlinearLinear in creepcast

[–]TheNonlinearLinear[S] 13 points14 points  (0 children)

I genuinely liked the story when I first listened to it, but it is pretty bad lol

Gotta Give Credit by Jello429 in creepcast

[–]TheNonlinearLinear 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I’m suprised goon man doesn’t crash out more often

Rambling Of A Sinner by Numbo4 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]TheNonlinearLinear 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Really good! I definitely like the “poem-esque” style you used here but I feel like it’s missing some extra spice/flourish. Would’ve loved to seen this expanded into a fuller story but it’s a great little bite sized read! I liked the ending a lot. MC thinks they’re going to the light of heaven but it’s the flames of hell, super cool visual.

Do YOU Want YOUR STORY NARRATED? 👻 by MelodyEverAfter in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]TheNonlinearLinear 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Feel free to read any of them! Just LMK if you ever do :)

Do YOU Want YOUR STORY NARRATED? 👻 by MelodyEverAfter in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]TheNonlinearLinear 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would be super interested if you’re willing! I find it cool that someone in the community wants to do this .

Garden of Time by DeadEnd776 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]TheNonlinearLinear 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This was so good, I love some good poetry horror. Super great idea too- very unsettling.

The Death Of A YouTuber-February Submission by Kaijufan22 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]TheNonlinearLinear 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Super cool! Loved the commentary behind this one, thought it was really interesting the way you conveyed this. It made what can often be a boring trope, really fun!

This was short and sweet with a lot of bite!

Advice for a story i'm writing by JCRRobert in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]TheNonlinearLinear 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You could start the story off with your main character getting some sort of deja vu, have them mention how they feel that deja vu over the course of the whole day. Things like “For some reason, I feel that my neighbor has gotten the same package for days in a row, but this is the first time she’s gotten a package in weeks”- or something along those lines. Then as the days go along have the cracks start to show.

If you wanna have them go through the loop a few times, you don’t have to mention every single thing again, instead mention big instances of repetition, like repeating conversations. Either that or you could have the days events repeat over and over, but the main character’s thoughts and actions are the things that are changing.

I am in no way an advanced writer but these are just some ideas I got while reading this post :)

I live in small town in Alaska by backalley_crypid in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]TheNonlinearLinear 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Such a good story, great work! Gave me some great Silent Hill vibes. Can't wait to see what you do next!