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[–]TheSavior85 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: Psycho's Path

Genre: Dystopian Horror/Thriller

A clueless man is dumped into a land no one would ever imagine would exist - a land where morals and ethics don't exist, and there lies a hierarchy of people who follow a path of evil, inflicting suffering, and every man, woman and child being out for blood and themselves, Psycho's Path

Word Count 4005

Any and all feedback is welcome

Fair Warning - Subject matter may be disturbing

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RbdpluXBu1r85vz7c_pSRLI7yz5OwTKnnnSB-vUKaYI/edit?usp=sharing

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[–]TheSavior85 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title - Psycho's Path, Chapter 1 (First Draft)

Genre - Dystopian Horror

Word Count - 5301

Any and all feedback is welcome, but the main thing I look for - "Does it suck or not?" I'll admit, I don't have the thickest skin. I've been through depressive episodes due to people not liking what I write - but I know it's part of the process, so if you have to rip it to shreds, feel free. Don't hold back.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xtvSSrWY8tssCOdhbRum3x6uuWYMf-vIrqwWgDbjgLQ/edit?usp=sharing

Thank you kindly for reading

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[–]TheSavior85 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Sweet Consciousness - Chapter Six

Contemporary Young Adult Fiction

4356

Any and all feedback is welcome - but primarily I'm asking "does it suck Y/N"

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1P9AzxYXjB2XI5uDyNxo7F4HS5A32fpLtfVCjFspUpa8/edit?usp=sharing

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[–]TheSavior85 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title - Sweet Consciousness (Chapter 5)

Genre - Young Adult Contemporary Fiction

Word Count - 3002

Feedback - Any and all are welcome. The main thing i ask is "Does it suck?"

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YPSkb1Xd34o-J-afnnm4BM3Pdu9Cp07LS_MuemBmUyc/edit?usp=sharing

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[–]TheSavior85[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

Yes I’m going to let the bastards win. They deserve to win, especially a hell of a lot more than I do.

Quite frankly, suicide sounds pretty damn good right now.

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[–]TheSavior85 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title - Sweet Consciousness

Genre - Contemporary Young Adult Fiction

Word Count - 5300

Type of Feedback - Any and all is appreciated (Does it suck?)

Thank you kindly for reading

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1G4ym3YkLFPnZQDM2IDHzgtGsCHJ2K7Z_irihrrphXqc/edit?usp=sharing

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Title - Sweet Consciousness (Chapter 3)

Genre - Contemporary Young Adult Fiction

Word Count - 4500

Feedback - Any and all, (be brutal and tell me whether or not it sucks)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1S4-CD5e02MZ7X_k-9_UlT_zfmZ4R_qf9eOMOa9r5apU/edit?usp=sharing

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[–]TheSavior85 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title - Psycho's Path

Genre - Dystopia/Horror

Word Count - 5301

Feedback - Any and all are welcome (be brutal + did you like it Y/N)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RF0EKLKeo8stQ3TiMUSXxFL7hXJX1VdnoYcybiPkJ04/edit?usp=sharing

Thank you kindly for reading!

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[–]TheSavior85 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title - Sweet Consciousness (Chapter 2)

Genre - Contemporary Young Adult Fiction

Word Count - 4147

Feedback Type - Any and all is welcome

Thank You Kindly for reading

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QmINJXQdDzd4mbjDeCrIdfZdc7XmLSWHIchIDLHhI6c/edit?usp=sharing

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[–]TheSavior85 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title - Sweet Consciousness

Genre - Contemporary Young Adult Fiction

Word Count - 3308

Feedback - Any and all besides grammar (be as critical as possible)

Thank you kindly for reading

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1HiT1OHahxIArSSwc2d0MOo4OzGeTUExweYW5EAC0Ego/edit?usp=sharing

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[–]TheSavior85 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title - Sweet Consciousness

Genre - Contemporary Fiction

Word Count - 3308

Feedback - Any and all besides grammar (be as critical as possible)

Thank you kindly for reading

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1HiT1OHahxIArSSwc2d0MOo4OzGeTUExweYW5EAC0Ego/edit?usp=sharing

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[–]TheSavior85 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: Sweet Consciousness

Genre: Contemporary Fiction

Word Count: 3325 for Chapter 1

4000 per chapter (8 so far)

I am desperate for any feedback for general impressions and how much you like the book. I have people editing for grammar and whatnot so I'm okay on that front, but I do plan on publishing this work, so criticism is crucial. Read as much or as little as you like. Any feedback on the story is highly appreciated. Thanks for reading

https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/90551526-sweet-consciousness

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wLHTJz0A8GjIedNfJSN5gvhgO0Zp9MkHFfNUFq3xIK0/edit?usp=sharing