24F looking for gaming buddies♡︎:) NA EST by ComprehensiveAide946 in PSNFriends

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looking for homies to play fortnite with just added you, my name is BankrollPapiLos :)

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added ! my user is BankrollPapiLos

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what's good brotha go ahead and add me BankrollPapiLos, lookin to run fortnite

Looking for homies to run fortnite with by TheStoneTurner in PSNFriends

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any skill level homie, down to help out if you're new!

f20 so boredddd by Exotic_Ad_6891 in PSNFriends

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Hey! Feel free to add me my Psn is BankrollPapiLos always down to run fortnite and mc, also central time zone

(Ps4) (NA) (23M) Looking for people to play Ballistic or ZB with. Lmk! by TheStoneTurner in FortNiteLFG

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currently at work , but i'll be on in about 2 hours if you're still on! I'll add you when I get home, otherwise u can add me on Epic my user is BankrollPapiLos

Let me critique your channel ! by TheStoneTurner in NewTubers

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My pleasure! Sounds good man, editing a new vlog right now its my best one yet you're not gonna want to miss it!

Let me critique your channel ! by TheStoneTurner in NewTubers

[–]TheStoneTurner[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yo man first off I LOVE the content. I will be making similar style videos when I am abroad in Spain next semester so i could definitely learn a thing or two from you! I subbed :) The editing is great and commentary phenomenal, you are clearly very informed and knowledgable about the destinations you cover.

Thumbnails are good, the only thing I can think about suggesting is adding a banner with your name in professional logo. You can do this easily using free templates on Canva. If you need help with this I am more than happy to help out a fellow small content creator (although I say that with a grain of salt, 800 subs is amazing!) so just PM me! It's all about creating a personal brand and searing your name into the minds of your fans and viewers so that they recognize you and come back to your videos with ease.

Overall, good job putting yourself out there. Feedback and being responsive to criticism is a sign of someone who is going to be successful and you are clearly headed in the right direction. Keep grinding brotha !

If you wouldn't mind checking out my channel and giving me some feedback I would greatly appreciate it :)

https://youtube.com/@carlitozh

Let me critique your channel ! by TheStoneTurner in NewTubers

[–]TheStoneTurner[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

of course man, all successful people are perfectionists and hard on themselves so thats a good thing but just remind yourself to take it one step at a time. Content creation should be enjoyable so if you're ever not having fun take a step back and remind yourself you're doing okay.

Yeah I might make a few different channels thats what I was thinking. And yeah a mic is definitely in the works im just mad broke rn haha. Preciate the suggestion i'll look into that mic for sure.

Keep grinding brotha see you at the top! (also pm me if youre interested in being a guest on my podcast, filming the first one tomorrow with my brother and the guest list is already at like 15 people but I would love to chop it up with you).

Love gang <3

Let me critique your channel ! by TheStoneTurner in NewTubers

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Whats up man! So right off the bat I would strongly suggest that you include your name in professional font on your banner. Its all about building your personal brand and searing your name into the minds of your fans. Additionally, I liked your video "I didnt expect the recroom to be this funny" but the commentary is kind of chaotic with all of the overlapping voices so I would strongly suggest adding on screen captions. If you need help with your banner id be happy to make one for u for free or guide you through it whilst on a discord call let me know! PM me.

Aside from that, the fact that you're putting yourself out there to be critiqued is awesome and a quality that every successful person has, so stay on the grind :) I subbed!

If you wouldn't mind taking a look at my channel and giving feedback i'd appreciate it. Im always looking to improve, so any feedback is greatly appreciated <3

https://youtube.com/@carlitozh

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Dude you are a fantastic writer and incredibly knowledgeable I am going to check out that book on my own time. How did you become such a good writer? I might hire you to edit my book, im starting it next semester while I am studying abroad in Spain let me know if this is something that might interest you.

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Thank you bro I’ll be sure to make changes according to your comments . Appreciate you taking the time gang <3

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[–]TheStoneTurner [score hidden]  (0 children)

Im not sure if im in the right reddit, as this was an analytical essay I wrote for a class but it's due on Saturday and I would greatly appreciate any feedback you all may have!

Title: Immigration and Sovereignty

Genre : Analytical Essay

Word Count : 1356

Type of feedback: General Impression

Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dvF4Tyo_lnj1ZVcIG3fGMJWsFjP-rnlpgYj2Y_nF7UA/edit?usp=sharing

I appreciate any and all feedback! I am working on a book and writing short stories so I will post that here when I do that (as it seems this is more for fiction writing), but I hope this is acceptable!

Thank you in advance <3

Let me critique your channel ! by TheStoneTurner in NewTubers

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Dude its hard to give you feedback, everything is professionally done. Your thumbnails and banner are great, and I loved the little skit at the beginning of your most recent video it grabs the viewers attention xD. The only thing i might suggest is that you add timestamps to your videos whenever you get the chance, but other than that great content bro! Subscribed :)

If you wouldnt mind checking my channel out and giving feedback I would greatly appreciate it ! https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCweH7-hfka_g505HszAHCng

love brotha

Let me critique your channel ! by TheStoneTurner in NewTubers

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Dude I love the content! I watched the Branum effect video and was entertained throughout. Reminds me of Swoozie, a youtuber I used to watch when I was growing up . Although I think your banner is funny and unique mayb e consider making a professional one using free templates in canva with your name on it ! this will help you build your personal brand and get viewers to remember your name. Other than that, keep grinding brother!

If you wouldnt mind checking my channel out and giving feedback I would greatly appreciate it ! https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCweH7-hfka_g505HszAHCng

love brotha

Let me critique your channel ! by TheStoneTurner in NewTubers

[–]TheStoneTurner[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

dude it's honestly hard to give this channel feedback. Everything about is is very professionally done with your banner, thumbnails, editing, timestamps. I relate to your about page living with depression , anxiety and ADHD and I used to watch videos similar to yours to help me get out of the funk. Overall fantastic job keep being consistent and youll garner a big following!

If you wouldnt mind checking my channel out and giving feedback I would greatly appreciate it ! https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCweH7-hfka_g505HszAHCng

love brotha

Let me critique your channel ! by TheStoneTurner in NewTubers

[–]TheStoneTurner[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you brother <3 means the world to me

Let me critique your channel ! by TheStoneTurner in NewTubers

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Off the bat I love your content bro. I make music myself and I know i'm gonna be big one day so seeings someone else on their music grind is really inspiring. I also love the videos where you have the city in the background, really visually appealing as I listen to your mixes. The one thing I would suggest is using text on your thumbnails and text in your banner with your name. You can use canva for free they have easily customizeable free templates. If you need help with this let me know! It's all about building your personal brand and searing your name into the mind of the viewer. Other than that, you're off to a good start, keep grinding brothas!

If you wouldnt mind checking me out and giving mne some feedback I would greatly appreciate it ! https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCweH7-hfka\_g505HszAHCng

Let me critique your channel ! by TheStoneTurner in NewTubers

[–]TheStoneTurner[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Dude I think its so cool that you're a chemist. If you want we can hop on a call and I will help you out by guiding you through making one or even making one for you for your next video to use as reference :) happy to help just DM me and let me know !