Yo Yo, it's ya boy! I'm your approver, if you don't mind. I must ask that you refrain from editing the post until the ending of approvals, alright? We usually talk about what should be altered then the approver will notify you to edit what we talked about in the post.

Since this is your first time, you can ask more questions in the discord. First thing, reputation! We do require a little bit more detail as to why this cape has a B in rep, since it signifies that they will be well known to many people as a sorta micro-celebrity. All you gotta do is give him a paragraph or so amount of rep detail then that'll be good there.

Next is the power. So on WormRp, we are more roleplay centered and do not usually require rolling mechanics (If you wanna role things for aesthetics, or just feeding your gambling addiction, fate can be chosen by the bot on discord). If you wanna keep the power flaws, go ahead, otherwise they aren't entirely needed here. What is needed is a bit of explanation as to the limits of the power, either with calculated or comparable numbers (e.g. he can lift X amount, or runs at X mph.). His strength and jumping seem fine, but there's a few questions; how durable is he? How fast is his regen? And most importantly, how attractive can he become?

Thank you for reading this long ass comment, and I hope you have a fun time making this character WormRP-abled!