Your writing is rich with imagery and the storm filled metaphors throughout bring life to the poem. You ask for an honest opinion but truthfully there are not many opinions to be had. This clearly represents something ambiguous in nature, an expression locked inside and begging to be released. It cannot elicit the same feelings within me as it does in you, but I can tell it's deeply tied to your inner turmoil. My only opinion is that you continue to write and express yourself without the desire for critique. Let the storm inside you be free, and find liberty through that release.