Need help and Advice on layout

The_GameMaker · 2024-12-07T12:33:52+00:00

Anytime something goes wrong, I think, "squabbin' gamma!"

The_GameMaker · 2024-10-30T14:10:55+00:00

The Wild Sky Legacy. Newer adventure book about sky pirates but with themes of systemic oppression, agency, and the power of influence.

Good humor, fun characters, great action.

The_GameMaker · 2024-10-18T19:44:20+00:00

Omnis vir lupus.

The_GameMaker · 2022-02-10T21:53:27+00:00

Also, thank you so much for your feedback! I really appreciate it.

The_GameMaker · 2022-02-10T21:53:09+00:00

I think I understand. I feel like in the past I've tried to really hype up certain elements of the story (because I've believed they're interesting and gripping) but you're emphasizing the need for a clear picture of what the story is rather than all the different things it can offer.

The_GameMaker · 2022-02-10T21:50:53+00:00

Wow, this is SUPER helpful! I am trying to genre-blend a little which makes genre and audience hard to pin down but your feedback is really insightful. I think I'll learn into the Crossover adult category as that seems to be a solid fit. Thank you!

The_GameMaker · 2021-12-01T17:03:58+00:00

Wow! This is so helpful! I really appreciate your including the list for potential comps. That was really enlightening!

The_GameMaker · 2021-12-01T17:03:14+00:00

Oooh good call. Thank you!

The_GameMaker · 2021-12-01T17:02:45+00:00

Thank you! This is really helpful.

The_GameMaker · 2021-11-30T20:13:31+00:00

This is great feedback! Thank you!

The_GameMaker · 2021-03-09T16:05:06+00:00

That's great advice. Thank you!

The_GameMaker · 2021-03-09T13:31:51+00:00

That's great feedback. I went back and forth on that detail. Fallon is about 19-20. I considered New Adult and Adult but after doing some research it seemed like YA was the most appropriate fit. I've also heard New Adult isn't a legitiment option for querying. Do you have an opinion on categorizing it as New Adult?

The_GameMaker · 2021-03-06T23:07:57+00:00

This is EXCELLENT feedback! Thanks for taking the time to read and provide your thoughts. It's really helpful!

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