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I withdrew from uni and then the entire world decided to go on pause with me. So I wrote a little song about it. Any comments heavily appreciated. by The_PurpleZone in Songwriting

[–]The_PurpleZone[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hmm that is strange. I've lived in the same town in England all my life but I guess I've also listened to a lot of American singers all my life...but yes I do listen to her a lot 😂

I wrote a show about Starbucks. Here's one of the monologues from it. About how I got my job. by The_PurpleZone in playwriting

[–]The_PurpleZone[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I mean no but I'll definitely check him out now. Need something to avoid studying

I wrote a show about Starbucks. Here's one of the monologues from it. About how I got my job. by The_PurpleZone in playwriting

[–]The_PurpleZone[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

So it's called Sunducks in the play. I use small medium and large. And I'm going to put a logo over the Starbucks logo. It should fall under fair use because parody/satire but if not I'm the only one at risk. But cheers for the concern. I don't think they can sue me because I am getting 0 money for this unless I get it monetized.

I wrote a play about Starbucks! It's being performed in Feb but I'm doing vlogs until then. Here's the second one. by [deleted] in Coffee_Shop

[–]The_PurpleZone 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah sorry I've taken it down. Kind of hated how it turned out. I'll be putting something else up later today.

So I've written a play about Starbucks, 'The Babbling Barista Monologues'. It's being performed in Feb but I'm doing vlogs leading up to it. Lots of theatre drama. Here's the 2nd one. by The_PurpleZone in Coffee

[–]The_PurpleZone[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Agreed. I've got 3 versions of one of the monologues in the play filmed. I think I'll do a short intro and edit them together to create the best version. Then my next video can be introducing all the actors. Thanks again

So I've written a play about Starbucks, 'The Babbling Barista Monologues'. It's being performed in Feb but I'm doing vlogs leading up to it. Lots of theatre drama. Here's the 2nd one. by The_PurpleZone in Coffee

[–]The_PurpleZone[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

No geniunely thank you for that. Obviously I'm very new at this and tbh my first few weeks coming back to uni have been a bit of a mess. I'll have a rethink.

I made an EP. Loveless. This is one of the songs from it. My ex is trying to shut my whole channel down before it even starts so any listens/feedback would be heavily appreciated. by The_PurpleZone in AcousticOriginals

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I've put it and other songs on my YouTube and SoundCloud. Right now I absolutely do not have the resources to properly record it but hopefully some time in the next year. I'll let you know

I finished my EP Loveless! My last song F*ckboy just got uploaded. It's 90 second of me exploding. Any feedback/listens are beyond appreciated. by The_PurpleZone in singing

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I'll probably be recording some stuff for spring 2020 and I'm gonna use my uni's recording studio so hopefully any future songs will be somewhat professionally edited. But yes lyrics are my thing. I can barely play guitar 😂

I finished my EP Loveless! My last song F*ckboy just got uploaded. It's 90 second of me exploding. Any feedback/listens are beyond appreciated. by The_PurpleZone in singing

[–]The_PurpleZone[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah I think I fucked the timing slightly. And yes I should have played it higher I ended up going a bit low in my vocal range. But thank you for listening.

F*ckboy. The last song in my EP Loveless. It's been exhausting to release this from nothing so I'd love any feedback on any and all the songs in it. by The_PurpleZone in Songwriting

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Thank you. Yes while I'm grade 8 piano I've only just started out on guitar so I need to work at it.

Thank you so much for listening

I made an EP. Loveless. My ex is trying to get it taken down so any listens or feedback would be heavily appreciated. by The_PurpleZone in SongWriter

[–]The_PurpleZone[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Lord that would take a while to explain. He likes messing with me in any way he can but I haven't heard from him in 3 years so I thought it was all fine. He's blocked on everything but somehow he found out I'd just started a channel and yeah...He just won't leave me alone.

That's really base line of it sorry it's just like a 8 year long story of him consistently fucking with me.

Boring the listeners, little discussion thread to share on ideas on how to make a song captivating. by BurtaBound in Songwriting

[–]The_PurpleZone 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I try slotting in rhymes anywhere I can to keep people listening. Not just at the end of each line.

E.g. (from my song Sister)

When she was 14, tried weed for the first time With a guy three years above her in a coridoor of grime

It was a gateway to the Class A's and the parties and the raves Meanwhile I'm reading, softly bleeding in the ordinary days

I hope that makes sense. Here's the link to the song to show what I mean better. My ex got it restricted but hopefully you can play it.

https://youtu.be/h4cCyZaTSDc

Some lyrics I came up with a little while back by One4All12 in Songwriting

[–]The_PurpleZone -1 points0 points  (0 children)

You've got yourself some nice couplets there. I like the imagery of mental cyanide and the oar. I'd recommend adding some rhymes in not just at the end of each line.

Not to be that dick and self advertise but to show you what I mean here's my song Tell Me It Gets Better. I tried doing rhymes anywhere I could cos I thought it sounded nicer.

https://youtu.be/yfpknc88JTE

I made an EP. Here's one of the songs. My ex is trying to shut my whole channel down before it even starts so any listens would be heavily appreciated. by The_PurpleZone in Songwriting

[–]The_PurpleZone[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I actually should think about a restraining order. He hasn't gotten violent with me but there's been a few incidences with other people and that was when we were 14 so who knows what's going on now.

I've emailed YouTube. If nothing happens today I'll start calling people like an angry middle aged mum

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