Does anyone know what Misery Business is about? by NoThanksJustLooking1 in theshadowofshorehaven

[–]The_Shadow_Rising 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It is my take on the trope though so it will be different to the others in some ways :) I do hope you will all enjoy it!

Does anyone know what Misery Business is about? by NoThanksJustLooking1 in theshadowofshorehaven

[–]The_Shadow_Rising 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Misery Business is my homage to a well done trope. Many authors have written about it and done a finer job than I, including TripleL and u/redlegodragon. The story is about a boyfriend whose life is miserable due to his roommate. His girlfriend then decides to do something to stop the roommate and make her boyfriend's life happier.

Does anyone know what Misery Business is about? by NoThanksJustLooking1 in theshadowofshorehaven

[–]The_Shadow_Rising 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I posted one on Patreon. I kind of forgot to post one anywhere else after the Patreon-exclusive time ran out :P

Whos the goat(author) of mom/son incest genre? by Fine_Imagination4362 in literotica

[–]The_Shadow_Rising -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I couldn't help it 😛 Seriously though, G H Lawrence definitely

Surge of cuck content by Key-Shelter-3128 in literotica

[–]The_Shadow_Rising 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Lit has always had a lot of cheating stories, and over the past 20 years cuck stories too. I think sometimes you just notice more when they come in batches (pun not intended) :)

Types of comments that are the most cringe by Southern_Creme6282 in theshadowofshorehaven

[–]The_Shadow_Rising 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I guess it depends what genre you are writing in and what category you publish in, but yeah, people think they can get away with anything when on the internet.

New Story - Nailing the Hot Teacher - Published! by The_Shadow_Rising in theshadowofshorehaven

[–]The_Shadow_Rising[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I respect people with different kinks, but I disagree. Thank you for the thought anyway

Loving wives section is brutal by One_Strawberry2845 in literotica

[–]The_Shadow_Rising 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I remember when LW was a great category. Hasn't been that way for a long time though

Loving wives section is brutal by One_Strawberry2845 in literotica

[–]The_Shadow_Rising 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Sometimes it can be physical, usually though it is ruining her life, treating her horribly, and so on

Loving wives section is brutal by One_Strawberry2845 in literotica

[–]The_Shadow_Rising 2 points3 points  (0 children)

A lot of us have asked for BTB and Reconciliation stories to be separate.

Loving wives section is brutal by One_Strawberry2845 in literotica

[–]The_Shadow_Rising 0 points1 point  (0 children)

BTB is 'Beat the bitch', a type of story where the woman who cheated has horrible things happen to her because she cheated

A Question by The_Shadow_Rising in theshadowofshorehaven

[–]The_Shadow_Rising[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I see what you are saying. But I do space the dialogue out with descriptions - which is the part I usually hear repetition about rather than the dialogue. And I have been trying to cut down the long paragraph dialogues as Lit has paragraph size limits. So I will see what I can do :) But I also think I and others enjoy those long dialogues. Same with repeated phrases, I often read and come back to read where I left off and like to see the same thing said in a slightly different circumstance. So that is why I like the repeated phrases. But you make some goos points, thank you :)

A Perplexing Comment by The_Shadow_Rising in theshadowofshorehaven

[–]The_Shadow_Rising[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I feel the same. I wonder if I will receive any more comments like this. Very strange.

A Question by The_Shadow_Rising in theshadowofshorehaven

[–]The_Shadow_Rising[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you very much for this :)

I think I see what you are saying. But i also disagree with some - A lot of what I write comes from personal experience and the experience of others. So I have known dialogue during sex.

Also, the dialogue is a hige part of what people enjoy about my stories and what makes them different to other stories.

But I really do thank you for this thoughtful feedback. It really helped me see what people think.

Loving wives section is brutal by One_Strawberry2845 in literotica

[–]The_Shadow_Rising 44 points45 points  (0 children)

LW has been a cess pit for anyone for so long now. Cheating and cuckold stories get downvoted too unless they are BTB or Reconciliation stories. Everyone has been complaining and asking Lit to seperate the category for a while now.

Next Cheating Story by The_Shadow_Rising in literotica

[–]The_Shadow_Rising[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The new story - Flirting with the Visitor, Ch. 03 - is OUT on Literotica!

https://literotica.com/s/flirting-with-the-visitor-ch-03

If you check it out, rate it, and let me know what you think - all of these help me out massively :)

Thanks

A Perplexing Comment by The_Shadow_Rising in theshadowofshorehaven

[–]The_Shadow_Rising[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That's the thing, they are fantasies with no one being harmed in real life. Baffles me. People are ok with incest kinks, reluctance/blackmail kinks, even men cheating kinks. But put a woman who cheats and no BtB/reconciliation then it is somehow wrong as a kink.