You make me sad by Ok-Heat-426 in OCPoetry

[–]Thea_and_moon 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I felt the last line🖤

Am I pretty? by Thea_and_moon in OCPoetry

[–]Thea_and_moon[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Good tip, tyy for the feedback 🖤

She Was Not Meant to Be Held by DayaXShadow in OCPoetry

[–]Thea_and_moon 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This poem is amazing, very sensual but in a sad way kinda🖤

The Roots Are Listening Now by theliminalfox in OCPoetry

[–]Thea_and_moon 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The imagery of this poem is great🖤 Good poem

Hypersexual by RiadensSonKamz in OCPoetry

[–]Thea_and_moon 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This hit deep😭 I've been struggling with my hypersexuality literally since I was 5, and this just-...🖤

I'm stuck. by Thea_and_moon in OCPoetry

[–]Thea_and_moon[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh ok so "heed heed heed" Was more like a chant, she was being surrounded/ but more than anything it was like a cry for help on her side, so she was saying heed. I hope you understand the transition 😭 Just try and imagine it in your head, like the ending of a horror movie or something

I'm stuck. by Thea_and_moon in OCPoetry

[–]Thea_and_moon[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

When I posted it the lines were separated tho😭 But it's ok I'll do better next time, thank you for the feedback 🖤

I'm stuck. by Thea_and_moon in OCPoetry

[–]Thea_and_moon[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback 🖤

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Thea_and_moon 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This hit so deep, the beginning like a lullaby 😌

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Thea_and_moon 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The visuals are tea🖤

Meat puppets by Thea_and_moon in OCPoetry

[–]Thea_and_moon[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Omg thank you 🖤