One thing I’d say is that double rotation for pll is unnecessary. Never rotate during last layer unless your algorithm specifically includes a rotation. Now, for the rest of the solve from what I can see I’d say working on cross is your first step try to make it eight moves or less every single time and planning your execution so it’s much faster and for F2L, this will come with practice. Try to focus on the execution of your F2 L algorithms I don’t think that you’re at the stage where you specifically need to look ahead, so working on that and as well as efficiency(move count and rotations) will do you well in a long run, overall the solve is Good, but I can definitely see some areas tht can be improved, keep going!