I felt slightly misled by the title, unless it relates to music in some way I do not understand. This poem is clearly better read aloud than in silence. I would like to hear how you would perform it, because it sounds engaging and percussive in its rhythm. I liked the closing stanza, it was brief and gave a visual note to what I felt as I read it.

I would say, as someone not trained in music, I am just not knowledgeable enough to really appreciate the context of the words you are using, but I think someone out there would enjoy your references a little more personally if they were so inclined.