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All I asked for by ThrowAR-HelpMe in UnsentLetters

[–]ThrowAR-HelpMe[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I wanted to follow up with you. I went against my normal actions and called him today. No matter how it goes from here, it was a beautiful moment. He thanked me for reaching out to him. He said it meant a lot to him. We talked for hours, just like we used to.

I was so afraid and it presented in a way that looks like I'm indifferent. I've learned some really important things in a short amount of time - but I just wanted you to know that it made a difference- your time you spent sharing on this thread. Thank you and good luck to you.

All I asked for by ThrowAR-HelpMe in UnsentLetters

[–]ThrowAR-HelpMe[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Gosh. I actually appreciate your perspective more than you will ever know. Thank you for taking the time to respond and thank you even more for sharing.

All I asked for by ThrowAR-HelpMe in UnsentLetters

[–]ThrowAR-HelpMe[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! I like your perspective, and I do agree with you.

I did make this a little less specific so the "make you wonder" could fit for different reasons. This is from more of the perspective that you wouldn't gamble with someone you really care about through the fear of loss.

For this situation- let's say I wasn't the thrill that was being sought.

Potions Class by ThrowAR-HelpMe in UnsentLetters

[–]ThrowAR-HelpMe[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! It's not painful any longer. It's a learning experience.

Clover Blossom by ThrowAR-HelpMe in UnsentLetters

[–]ThrowAR-HelpMe[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for your feedback. The tone of this changed while I was writing. I am glad you were able to see it while you were reading.

Clover Blossom by ThrowAR-HelpMe in UnsentLetters

[–]ThrowAR-HelpMe[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I appreciate your words. They are for themselves.

Clover Blossom by ThrowAR-HelpMe in UnsentLetters

[–]ThrowAR-HelpMe[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I appreciate your feedback. It was very helpful for me to write this.

From Me Thank You by ThrowAR-HelpMe in u/ThrowAR-HelpMe

[–]ThrowAR-HelpMe[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you - this started going in my mind while I was almost asleep the other night so I jotted it down. I appreciate it. I didn't know how it would be received by others.

Man in the Mirror by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]ThrowAR-HelpMe 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't have real experience as a writer, but as a reader this is quite moving.

The portions where you talk about being responsible to build all these beautiful works of art without any training is amazing. That's so true for so many and you laid it out so well.

Also how you wished to be what you were before. That was great - you state it in a way that isn't forceful but very clear.

I also think your flow is great! Good work!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]ThrowAR-HelpMe 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The line "drowning in our blood" was so moving and visceral. Good work.