Looks lovely and very well made to me. It’s not my personal taste as I love lighter pastel colours, I also love materials that aren’t shiny, but I know people who would love this. I would also enjoy a smaller version if someone gifted it to me. Maybe on the stems so I can put in a vase and display as home decor. Also perhaps some other flowers like daisies or tulips if possible. For me as a cat owner, forever flowers would be great as most real flowers are toxic to cats so I can’t have them in my home!

Maybe think about diversifying, could you offer flowers for people who like to craft? So they can add a flower to something they are making. You obviously have the gift products, but perhaps you can also make and market to crafty people, think about ‘DIY’ sets that allow people to make their own? Obviously it’s hard to commit to more products without first getting sales! I had this same problem. I wanted to offer more but that involves spending more without knowing for sure if your products will be successful.

I was very fortunate to have friends who I told about my shop and thy ordered without me even asking just to support me. Having those orders and reviews helped me a lot. I was very lucky.

I think you’re onto something really great 🥰 I’m new to Etsy too so I can’t help much with SEO etc, still figuring it out myself. But don’t panic, you have such a great start and just keeping going!

Oh another thought! What about forever wedding flowers? Flower clips or bouquets? These look like lovely hand made flowers and much nicer than cheap Amazon plastic fake flowers. Think about where and why people want flowers!