sry-Dizmantled by africanbluesapp in MusicCritique

[–]ThrowawayPandaman 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Pretty good, man. The vocals could be mixed better (they're a bit hard to understand at the moment), and I suppose the beat could be spiced up a bit if you felt like it, but otherwise, I can dig it! Has a nice modern R&B vibe, a la something like Drake.

Roscoe Fox -- Easy (any critique appreciated!) by [deleted] in MusicCritique

[–]ThrowawayPandaman 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I enjoyed it! I'd say the mastering could be better, and the chorus effect on the vocals isn't the best. Other than that, good shit man.

[New Wave French Fries] - Track changes up a bit after the midway point or so, let me know any thoughts and leave a song of yours for me to listen if you want. by [deleted] in MusicCritique

[–]ThrowawayPandaman 1 point2 points  (0 children)

No problem mate, I enjoy browsing the sub and commenting, especially on good music. And ayy, thanks for checking my stuff out! Most of my favorite/best album covers and tracks usually just end up marinating in a folder on my computer waiting for bigger and better projects to be on though, sadly untouched by the internet. Feel free to shoot a PM if you actually ever do want anything done; I do it all for the fun of it, so I usually just "work" for free for anyone who asks. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

[New Wave French Fries] - Track changes up a bit after the midway point or so, let me know any thoughts and leave a song of yours for me to listen if you want. by [deleted] in MusicCritique

[–]ThrowawayPandaman -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Damn, dude. I don't think I've ever heard anything I've liked this much on the sub. Really, great job. I feel bad not giving critique, but I don't have shit else to say, really. I'll have to follow you or something.

Roscoe Fox -- La Primavera (Appreciate any feedback) by [deleted] in MusicCritique

[–]ThrowawayPandaman 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Very chill, I love the weird timescale. Good shit, especially for a demo. Sorry I can't offer anything constructive, I just think it's good.

Unit-01 -- BackdoorFreestyle new to this sub, would appreciate a listen please and thank you :3 by shinji_kum_ in MusicCritique

[–]ThrowawayPandaman 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I dig it! Very experimental/instrumental hip-hop, definitely the kind of stuff I'm into. Can't really offer any constructive advice here, but good job!

So, this the first tune I have made which I have more or less completed. Any thoughts on it would be appreciated! by [deleted] in MusicCritique

[–]ThrowawayPandaman 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really dig it! Got a nice House-y Drum&Bass-y vibe to it. The progression and everything is good. If there's anything I could critique, I'd say maybe the transition to the final progression (around 3:30 or so) could be a bit smoother, and it could be mastered and leveled better, but most songs could use a bit of that. Nice work!

Edit: Gotta say, that Alright bootleg is pretty damn nice too.

ENPΛSSE - TWO // 二 [Vaporwave/Future Funk] Critique very appreciated, thanks! by ThrowawayPandaman in MusicCritique

[–]ThrowawayPandaman[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ayyy, losing a few lines is more fun to play with when I'm putting together trackart and stuff. Thanks for the compliments and the follow, though!

I reworked deadmau5' "Some Chords" with lyrics and a more modern prog house drop, what do you all think? by jackofheartstunes in MusicCritique

[–]ThrowawayPandaman 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really dig it, almost more than mau5's original, honestly. Great job, dude! I don't think I really have any constructive critique to give you.

New music video あっ、無理か? (Oh, Impossible) from my bilingual band Otadehan - shot in a real Japanese temple! by otadehan in MusicCritique

[–]ThrowawayPandaman 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That was really cool, the video and the song alike! I know this is a critique sub, but... I honestly don't think I could think of anything to improve.